I enjoyed this, almost ten years after it was first posted here. Some grammar problems that weren't in other Yum stories, but ignorable. I really like the feel of the "missing" scenes. There's only so much they can do with a one hour show (42 minutes on DVD), only so much story they can tell. Somet things just have to be left on the cutting room floor, so to speak. Hope you're still around to know how much I enjoyed what you wrote.

Loved it!

That was so good and very emotional. I loved the way everything worked out in the end though.

That was so sweet. A great fic about one of the things that makes this show so good! Very moving. Keep up the great work!

Oh I love SG1, they are just like family.

Hey, this was really good. Loved the whole human tissue part, and the end was really good. Daniel was either really lucky, or A VERY good bluffer.

I just have to ask - have you had a major rewrite since most of the previous reviews have been posted? If not I fail to see where the confusing format is hidden in this fic. As an avid reader & an acedemic who has spent several years utilising words in the written form I have to say that these 'constructive' critiques seem more spitfull than helpful. By the way - I like the story too.

Wow. I just saw this ep for the first time tonight and I love this fic. The characterisations are perfect. You have done a wonderful job here. I can't praise you enough.

I found this story terribly hard to read because of the formatting (great globs of dialogue running together without paragraph breaks). Even without the formatting problems, the story needs serious editing. The verb tenses clash frequently (past and present tense in the same sentence). I also noticed several sentence fragments where words seemed to be missing. This reads like a rough first draft.

I liked the story, but it was hard to read the way it was layed out. Speakers need to be separated more; needs more division in the paragraphs to make it less confusing. Other than the layout and the difficulty reading it, I enjoyed the storyline.

An interesting character study that never really goes anywhere. Ruined by bad formatting.

I liked the story. It was nice to see "aftermath" which is normally left out of TV shows. Some of the dialogue was very in-character, especially Jack's. There were some problems though: 1) It got a little too mushy-which seemed out of character; 2) the constantly changing points of view without scene breaks got very confusing; and 3)(related to 2) dialogue: Each character speaking should have a different paragraph so that it's clear when a new person is speaking.

Extremely accomplished and very well-visualised. You've got a great grasp of the foursome, and it's easy to imagine how this fits in the progression of Season Two. I'm off to read some more...:-