Wait you cany just leave it like this?
What happen ? I gotta know _

Oh boy! That doesn't sound good!

Oooooohhh

Wait what happened to Bee tho?!

i started crying about two chapters ago. i've never had a strong reaction to fan fic's but yours pulls at my "spark" strings. i feel Bee's pain as if it is my own.

I like this story so far. Keep up the good work.

This was so ironic! Last night I was trying to go to sleep and ended up thinking of old stories I read on ff awhile ago. This was one of the first I thought of! And then the next day I check my email and get an update from this story! I really like what's happening right now…can't wait for the sequel! I'm really looking forward to it!

:D

I found this story yesterday and got to chapter 7. Today, all I could think about was coming home annd reading the rest. This is fantastic! PLEASE make a follow up story.

Thank you for writing this it was so epically awesome. I feel like there should be more to this story are you going to make a sequel or do we have to imagine what would happen if you did not continue this story. I enjoyed reading this story and I hope that you can write a sequel for it I look forward to more on this story until then...

DovieDM-1991-Promised Wings signing out!

I wanna know what happens next! Will Daniel and Bee be okay? :o I hope so...

Please keep writing, this story is amazing and it's definitely piqued my intrest. Update soon! :)

Yaaaaay!

I read this all in one sitting... On an iPhone. You may have caused me to nearly drain all of my battery life on my phoe but this was just so... Excelled. I actually cried during parts and I was like, "why am I such a wimp :("

Your writing is great. The end left me rather puzzled on some things but hopefully a sequel will be in the midst of being created ;) I've only have 3% battery left so I better get off of here.

-3 Smiles

Can you imagine the squeal I made when I checked today? Woo hoo!

Thank you, thank you for explaining what Mirage did. I do wish he'd spoken to Optimus and not kept it to himself, however, at least he knew what was happening. Very cool. I wish he'd been in the movie, though I think "Dino" was supposed to be him or something. Not to me though.

I love that Bumblebee is all lively now...that is, if it is Bee? You are one cryptic author! I also love that Screamer is stuck in a Prius. HA! Just desserts. I missed Daniel not being the chapter, but oh well.

So...does this mean we're gonna get a sequel? Pretty please with Autobots on top?

IT'S BUMBLEBEE! IT'S BUMBLEBEE! I firmly and wholeheartedly believe that was Bee's spark. I'd still believe it even if you said it wasn't, lol.

A most excellent ending. Although I have to say it was a cliffhanger ending that made me pout something awful. I'm still bummed that Ratchet died. Boo hoo. I have to also admit that I'm a little confused, though that's probably my fault. I'm still wondering where Mirage went. I'll have to go back and check. I probably just missed something.

Here's my guess as to what happened exactly. I don't think his spark went to the Well of All Sparks. I really think somehow after Bee jumpstarted her heart with his spark, he somehow transplanted his spark into her consciousness/body. Whether or not this was intentional on Bee's part...only you know that! I think he recognized her presence in the Limbo and then used her as a vessel to get back. I also don't think it was Raptor's spark because the spark made a beeline (ha, I only just realized this was a pun!) for the Camaro because Bee's spark sensed his own body.

So that's what I think. Correct me if I'm wrong. I still don't have any closure. Couldn't we have an epilogue of fluff? Or a sequel with some fluff? It doesn't have to be a lot...thanks for the cool story. I had fun!

Awwww, man! how can you just leave us hangin like that? lol ... Amazing story... AMAZING! but-no fairs! lol

Ok, saying 'this story was one if the best I've ever read' just won't cover it! ;) I really like Daniel's character, by the way. I was a little thrown off at the last part though. Did she think it was bumblebee or raptor who did that to her? I really like how it ended though, even if I didn't quite get it! XD it had a sense of OMFG. Lol! So there's gonna be sequel, right?

I know I'm not the only one who will be saying:

UHH THAT WAS THE END? PLZ CONTINUE! Oh, and what ironhide did was pretty awesome too! He's one of my favorite characters in Transformers and in this amazing story! :)

Hope to see the sequel ASAP,

Col Lizzy

PS

Was that the ending…?

Or is there a sequel…?

XD