| Reviews for Touching |
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OreoKookee chapter 1 . 5/30/2013 That was perfect. |
Anitasonia1998 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012 This was cute! Please write more! |
zemoszi chapter 1 . 7/15/2011 It's me again. :) In the first section, you wrote, "Hey Liet" but it should be "Hey, Liet" because Poland is addressing Lithuania by name, and in the fourth section, you wrote "not matter," but I think you meant "no matter." Kudos to you for including some canon in part six! I really love your Poland in this story. Your Poland has actual depth and personality, as opposed to a shallow valley girl I see in other stories. That's also the reason why I don't usually ship this pairing, but I think you've converted me! I found the way you portrayed their need to be together and be touched especially heartbreaking and adorable. _ The bit about Poland and his sugar and chocolate made me laugh because I'm really the same. Mmm, chocolate chai tea? Best thing ever! _ Ciao~! |
SasuNaruForever17 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011 This was so cute! Nice job :) |