Yes it was sad they died but at least they got to see voldemort fall.

This is good. I think the voice that you mentioned in the fourth-from-last line was Voldemort. Am I right?

I really liked this, interesting perspective!

My favorite part is with Snape.

This was such a good story, very hard to describe. Beautiful, Funny, Bright, a little Darkness,... I can't come up with anything else, but your story is so much deeper than that. I like it.