I love the backhanded compliment in the line "she began to pen a letter, not to Harry, but to Hermione Granger, whom Luna admired for her ability to organize perfectly ordinary things such as magazine interviews."

Kinda out of character for Umbridge to let anyone escape without doing evil to them.

Luna's patronus is specifically a hare, not a rabbit. They are two different but similar-looking animals. difference/Hare_vs_Rabbit

Dirty business, but it's no less than Rita deserves. After all, if it wasn't for Umbridge, it'd probably be a close race between Rita and Bellatrix for most hated woman, at least in my book. Can't wait to see how the article turns out. :)

While it seemed a bit short, I did like seeing Xeno's feelings on his daughter's love life. As eccentric as he may be, he's still a doting, worried parent.

As far as the kissing goes, I really liked how you handled it in this chapter. Keep up the good work. _

I'm really enjoying this story :D You write Luna wonderfully. Can't wait for the next chapter

glad your better nd i look fwd 2 reading more

I liked it! Hope you are feeling better!

Sad to hear that. Hope you can get in good spirits again soon, and ignore that johnjohn guy in the reviews.

I hope you you get those happy thoughts back, I won't pretend to know what your going through, but maybe writing something, even if you don't publish it might help. Anyway, hope you get feeling better, your ever faithful reader, Leamu.

I'm really sorry to hear about your struggles.

Get better! From your writing, you sound like a very intelligent, witty and laid back person.

Your happiness is most important. I think I can speak for most of the other readers that we do not mind at all. Our prayers go out to you.

are you one of those teenagers who think life is just going to hand you things freakish emos.

Another great chapter!

I also like how Luna's being incorporated into the trio.

Neville/Ginny sounds interesting as well, but Ginny's jealousy looks to be still there. Interesting to see how that plays out.

I really enjoyed the Nargles moment between Harry and Luna. Very touching and sweet. And the way Harry is seeing her soft, discrete beauty as compared to the more obvious features of Ginny and Cho.

They're starting to get to know one another and become very comfortable. I'm looking forward to see how the relationship develops especially since you're doing a great job of following canon loosely.

Great kiss! Made me so happy. It fits in with Harry's forward nature to do that. Curious to see what happens next