Really enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing.

Excellent. As usual.

I would love to see them Bella and Edward meeting again years later, fantastic story ! One of a kind writing

What a perfect one-shot. Love it.

Are you ever in one of those moods when something just sets you off and you can't stop crying m? Well apparently this is me right now and this fic has me in tears :'( Please maybe do a full fic or something where they meet and you know be happy so I can preserve some dignity

Keep writing,
IvyMasonCullen

I would love to see this one shot given a happily ever after ending.

Love this. Want more! So bittersweet.

oh d mn it, I'm crying too :-((((( such a beautiful, but heartbreaking story! I didn't know there was going to be angst, dang it - lol...crying like a complete, lil b!tch over here! where do I go vote? I'll search in a minute, but man, what an awesome story, awesome writing! I hope whoever wrote this wins the contest! love, love, love - I'd beg and plead for a 2nd chapter - some sort of "10 years down the road" follow up, *sniff*

my love for this shorty has no limits ... Jandco - love your style and your mind !
Craving more of your words I will try to get into ADF .. surpressing my dislike for this
site, just to get to more of yours to still my craving addict's needs .. xox
(would it be bold to express the desire for this story to expand into a full length, multi
chapter sometime in the future?)

I was really emotional reading this.. I think it reminded me of myself, back when..
Great job / Good stuff.

This is a beautiful story.

Great O/S, young love is beautiful

Amazingly good! I've got to find more of your words now.

Damn fine writing. Very emotive and real, as the best short stories are.

Beautiful
growing up isn't always easy and you captured a love that what it needed to be at the moment it happend.