I understand that you haven't updated since 2014, but I keep hoping for a sequel. Just something like meeting the new sages a few years after. By the way, I think your profile is SUPER funny! Thanks!

And on Brawl and SSB for Wii U and 3DS it's TP Link not OoT Link but OoT Link and Zelda were on Melee and OoT Link was on the very first SSB

if it is on brawl, wouldn't it be Twilight Princess Zelda and not Ocarina of Time Zelda.

"What is one life in the shadow of millions?" -Robin FE:A
That's what I think.

I have seen this fic floating around for awhile, but never clicked on until today.

Boy, am I glad I did!

Just the way that you ended this story was amazing. I couldn't stop reading.

that's scary! and random. That red aura, tho xD

no more damsel! time to be the hero. :P u go Zelda! n Sheik?! yes! goint to be a sweet story!

This was one of the stories I have ever enjoyed reading in the entirety of ! My emotions seemed to have bounced off walls and sprang all around the room. Anyways, the piece was very well-written for the reasons it had good dynamism in vocabulary and proficient grammar. It was all-to-good to have a singular passionate kiss at the end, rather having it multiple times or at the middle. I did however spot some typographical errors, nonetheless, it was not very obvious and did not greatly affect your story. To conclude, great job! :)

I know it took forever to finally review this story but... Can I say this is one of the cutest endings I have ever read? 'Cause it is! Thanks for an awesome story and I can't wait to see what else you write!

You should probably change your nouns to pronouns to make your writing flow better. Try counting how many "Zeldas" you used in a paragraph, and you'll see what I mean.

I love the creativity here. The Assist Trophies bit was interesting. Seeing Krystal was a surprise since she wasn't in Brawl as a Brawler, but I'm assuming she will play a major minor character with Fox and Meta Knight. In fact, I hope you use the entire Brawl roster. That would be amazing!

I wish you described the Smash City more. I imagined it as a Colosseum with futuristic and past architecture, and maybe you imagined it differently. You need to guide readers more by inserting subtle descriptive sentences in your writing to make us see and get what everything looks like in your head.

I've realized you finished writing this. Perhaps you should plan on making a SSB4/Zelda story as a sequel to Royal Brawler.

It was good of you to incorporate the fighting styles into your story. I like that. Research is a nice foundation to any story that needs it.

Nice blonde-to-brunette save there. I'd still prefer if it were Twilight Princess Link, Ganondorf and Zelda. After playing Super Smash Bros. Brawl for a loooonnng time (SIX YEARS!), I always view them as their Twilight Princess selves. If you look at the trophies in the options menu, it even says they're the TP characters! Wow. I just made a big deal out of something that I said I wouldn't make a big deal of. But it's a big deal to me now! Ha ha.

Anyways, about the writing in this chapter...it was pretty good, but I saw repetitiveness of words in a couple of sentences. For example, "Eyes still adjusting to the new day, her eyes threatened to close before she flapped water..." has the words "eyes" repeated in it, making it clumsy and awkward to read. It isn't fluent if you repeat the same words more than once in a sentence (unless it's pronouns).

Aura studies are interesting. I'm interested in what will become of the out of the blue red aura, lol. :P

Great first chapter. The only things that annoyed me were your overuse of "that", which is really unnecessary in most sentences, and the invariance of sentence structure. In most of your sentences, they started with the subject "Zelda" or "s/he" or "Sheik" etc. It sounded very boring and it's the very thing you should stray away from when writing creatively.

I really enjoyed your story plot wise. Two of my favourite games combined into one :D I think you should've done Twilight Princess as a back-story instead of Ocarina of Time, mainly because Zelda and Link in brawl are based on the Twilight Princess appearances. Nonetheless, it didn't bother me that much, so I shall continue reading and reviewing! :)

LOVED IT. That bit after the line break was perfect. "Legend of Zelda." Yes. Indeed. Sweet satisfaction!

Congratulations on the story. This is quite the accomplishment (as is your story on Amazon - congrats! I'd love to know more!). I look forward to following what you do in the future. Keep being awesome!

Nicely done (: