| Reviews for Chrono Shift |
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Pokeshipping Fun2020 chapter 12 . 12/29/2016 Hi frien maybe can you write a me your answered but I want translated this story at Spanish if you is acordding with this wait your answer when you can write me your answer, you have credits in your story friend. |
Fabgurling chapter 12 . 10/5/2014 Just realized this story was made before I was born O_O |
Fabgurling chapter 12 . 10/5/2014 I loved you're story, no not the kind of love Ash feels when Misty kisses him, or the kind of love Misty felt when Ash gave her that French kiss. But it was the kind of love you feel when you know you will never forget something, the kind of love you feel at the end of a sad, yet romantic, movie. There are kisses and laughs and risks worth taking when you find love. I know that is what Ash and Misty feel towards each other, and I know one thing is for sure, I am going to tell every, and I mean every, person whom loves Pokémon about this, because one things for sure, they won't forget this experience either. E.E. Cummings once said, "Love is the voice under all silences, The hope that has no opposite in fear; The strength that is so strong even force is mere feebleness: The truth more first then sun, and more last then sun." I believe that E.E. Cummings is correct because, if we didn't have love what is the point of the moon and stars (other than tidal waves) what is the point in the sun? The theory of how love started is; The sun and moon shared the sky, yet it was as if every time the moon tried to show her beauty the sun's ego grew, and he blocked her out. But the sun did not mean it that way he wanted the moon to breathe; to live. And the thing was the sun loved the moon so much, he died every night, just so she could breathe. Most would know this story if not, I suggest you memorize it, because this story; the one of Moon and Sun, it is what created love, what gave us the true answer to why there is light, and dark. But one thing I know is true. I will never see love as beautiful as Ash and Mistys in this story, thus said, goodbye, and may the sun forever love the moon, cause if not, no-one would be here- no one. |
Pokeshipper chapter 12 . 10/11/2010 This was really good and making it an aaml was even better! |
SatoKasu4ever chapter 12 . 11/8/2009 awesome story! AAML 4 ever! i am a pokeshipper, so i love his story! |
K.T.Waterflower chapter 12 . 3/30/2008 That was a very romanic and funny story. I really love it. Time travelling stories are one of my favorite! Keep on writing and Updating! |
Mikazuchi chapter 12 . 10/25/2005 -sniff- ah... after reading this, I'm all teary and emotional man... oh god, the nostalgia! Man, I remember this story from years ago, it was the first AAMRN story I had ever read! That, and your other works that followed, they were what inspired me to become a writer! You are like a Hero, you know that? I wish you good luck to you, to be successful in anything you do. Peace out! |
reviewer not a writer chapter 12 . 1/12/2005 i love it |
gladdecease chapter 12 . 5/18/2004 Cool. I like it. |
charizardag chapter 1 . 4/6/2004 This story was the 1st and the best AAML story I ever read,I liked it. I also heard that you were making a comic out of one of your storys, could you make one out of this too? if you deside, E-mail me ASAP. also, even thought I liked it, it could use a little re-tweaking, If you want to know what exacly, E-mail me Thanks |
Etherelemental chapter 12 . 4/3/2003 That was very interesting as it seems that most of it all seemed to be quite amusing. I can only think of a few more elements that could be used to make it more amusing, but then it wouldn't be quite as good as it is now. |
Raichu chapter 12 . 3/9/2003 I know you wrote this ages ago and you've written even better stories since, but here goes. I really enjoyed reading every part of this story. Funny bits, exciting bits, even a few confusing bits. I think the explanation at the end was definitely needed. |
Dj Myc chapter 4 . 12/15/2002 Ash: Hey! Great fic. Misty: I agree with Ashy here; very cute. Ash: I ment it was exciting not cute! Misty: Well you gotta admit it was really cute especially when we fell in love. Ash: Um yea sure. Misty: Oh what do you know! Ash:: What do 'YOU' think MYC? MYC: Well I gotta say; it's one of the best AAMRN's I ever read! Ash: I think so too; Great job Mcx. Keep it up! Myc: Anyways until next time, this writer bides farewell. Misty: Buh bye Ash: yeah, laters P.S: Reac my fic. and tell me what I need ok. "I choose you...Misty?" It's not really that bad ya know. -Peace. |
Miss-Ashley chapter 12 . 6/2/2002 Misty: For a powerful pokemon it has such a fine female voice. Ash: Not as sweet as yours but I’m gonna capture it! Pikachu you’re up! *laughs* That was the cutest and the funniest scene I've seen in a fan fiction! Great fic! |
Destiny Star chapter 12 . 4/4/2002 Kewl... |