Lol. Looking forward to future updates, and enjoying the story very much. Maybe you can have some backstory on the ones like C and Queen, who the viewers don't know much about?

I love Mewtwo's spoon.

when you update?

Love it! Can't wait 4 chap 4! Do u mind putting me into the story as a Zoruark (or zorua) named "Crazy"? I would really LOVE that. Here we go on the description:

Gender: MALE

Personality:Smart,kind (most of the time), crazy

Backstory: "Crazy" was orphaned at a young age by pokemon hunters and spent his life with his 2 best friends- a gallade and scisor

Facts: Doesn't like to rush into fights but when needed to is kinda lowsey at fighting

Facts: Favors Ash, dislikes Paul (Who doesn't? ;) )

Facts: Is a inventor, but they usually fail... Like Clemont's from the x and y anime

Facts: Likes to break the 4th wall

Facts: Knows about all the legendarys... A LOT

Facts: WHY ARE THERE SO MANY FACTS!?

Note: I really hope you read this and add me to the story! You are doing so good so far and I know y won't disappoint me! Thanks!

-Crazy

Awesome story! Can't wait 4 chap. 4! LEL! Though when mew said that she would be turning them into pokemon, u could have made Ash say "Not Again!" (Season 5 episode 32 or 33, "Hocus pokemon") I still loved the story! hey do u mind putting me in the story as a zoroark named "Crazy" (Cause Crazymonkey is my username), please I would really apric

The story was fantastic but I have one question I want you to answer and the question is "Why did you make Victini, my favorite Pokemon, female instead of male since it looks like a male Pokemon?" just why would you make Victini female and not male, just why.

Sucks 10/10

I will not hail the queen! You didn't even stay on topic! You need to learn a thing called " FOCUS ".

I turned them back into humans with the potion of transformation,
But ash still has some Eevee features!
Loblolly vs gets vs Herobrine vs nut vs Dick

The plot is thick with suspence I enjoy what you have started though I'm wodering reasoning of your choices

Is there going to be more chaps?

Very Good! I love the jokes about ash never getting a girl friend, also with the descriptions of the changes. When will the next chapter be up?

Awesome story both of you, the gathering of so many mutual trainers in a story is rare(trust me I've looked) but I must comment on how your list of Ash's Rival's is incomplete.

You are missing Richie and Trip both trainers I would really like to see in this story if that is still a possibility. Other than that I find this story captivating and will patiently await the next chapter.

Never let the creative spark die out.
Purrich

hey i think they should all have smaller individual tests (like side quests)while doing the big test

Please Continue this And Eevee Ash Cool

But you deserve that review because I want the next chapter now :)

But yeah, May is wrong. Ash will see a bra. Do you know why? Cause Ash is Ash. He is the guy who can walk downthe street point at someone and they probably have a crush on him. (I find it funny that this could in fact be true xD)