Ha! This is great. Especially loved this part:

["You chose this game, Lurch. You'll just have to stop underestimating me. Or..." She rearranged her features into an expression of mock shock, and hand lightly on her chest, said, "But don't tell me you don't want to play anymore."

Despite himself a smile flickered across Niles' mouth. "Perish the thought."]

Their voices are perfect.

Love your stories! Please go on, write more!

This story was great! You have nailed these characters. Most authors on this site (myself included) write Niles and CC they way they want them to be but you write about them exactly as they are on the show, just making it more fun and giving us a deeper look into their relationship. Please write more!

very good- i only wish this were a lot longer- i liked it- i hope you will write another one soon

Something different! I heart something different to read!

When I first read the summary, I quickly watched that episode and then read your fic!

:D

Loved it, esp when picturing Niles all flustered at the thought of jail time...heehee

what a great little snippet. absolutely in character which i really appreciate. and it's not cheesy at all which is hard to pull off in fanfiction. i could actually envision this happening so awesome job. i hope you write more niles/cc stories. :)

This is great. The Sydney scene is one of my all-time favorites, and your continuation is perfect. I love "if only the kid had remembered the insulin line." Hysterical.