I admit, I did NOT expect that twist. Honestly, I just feel extremely happy for Hermione! I love how this was different to most stories!

No me gustó este final, si es una historia de Hermione x Edward, se espera que sean pareja y terminen juntos, si va a terminar con otro, mejor por la pareja como es y que las personas no entren engañadas a leer la historia, cuando la preventas como una Hermione x Edward y terminas leyendo un Hermione x charly, y no me desagrada charly, ni nada por el estilo, pero la historia no era lo que entre a leer, igual yo entiendo que es tu historia y haces con ella lo que tú quieras al final, y no te importa si decepciónas a muchos lectores, sólo quería decir que tú historia tenía mucho potencial y me gustó mucho el inicio, pero me decepcionó mucho el final

I loved your story and ending. Its different and a good different. I loved your characterization and the plot. okay, now Im gonna go read your other stories. Keep writing!

Loved how you ended it!

i am honestly so happy with how this ended. They're relationship was cute, and was more of what Bella needed to get over Eddie than what either of them needed, but I love how you ended this.

What an idiot if he had been is own person rather then rely on Alice's vision he wouldn't have ended alone
Great story!

hey, that was an unexpected ending.
but I like that.
I like hermione's ending and her happiness with her family

Stille_und_regen

hermione giving edward a chance to correct her mistake and kiss her right made me smile
teddy is adorable and sweet, i love him

hey, i love this story
I love how Hermione gets along with so many friends. How she gets along with the Cullens. Jacob and Luna are the most adorable thing and it made me smile
Charlie rooting for hermione gave me a little relief.
I'm angry at Bella and I think she had a lot of problems that were shown here.
Stille und regen

I just wanted to say - haters be damned - that I actually loved your ending. I thought Edward was a bit too controlling for Hermione anyway, and I really liked Charlie with her instead.

absolutely heart broken and I definitely cried in the last few chapters but this Hermione taught me a valuable lesson in itself even thought I am quite pissed at the ending. no hard feelings though - it was a pleasure to read.

I've read this chapter many times and it still bothers me. I enjoyed the story but it was inconsistent in places and had plot holes, such as this one. If Hermione got married at 27, then how could Luna have attended her wedding one year after she left Forks?
Did you mean to say the Harry/Ginny wedding that Hermione was maid of honour for?
I don't want this story to be tainted by uncertainty, so I would really appreciate if you cleared things up for me.
Thank you for writing!

Okay. For a quick read, this is sad.

Keep writing.

I do quite like a Hermione/Charlie story. From what you wrote, I was surprised Hermione and Edward even dated, especially when he was so cruel about her relationship with Jacob. Good work though I look forward to seeing more of your work.

NicE