sis this story is so good i keep rereading it 0_o and i know its been 4 years since u updated but please update when u get the chance ;(

There’s two things that I forgot to mention in my earlier full summary review. The first of which is I very much like that you seem to appreciate the importance of in-story time to let things settle and grow organically. Too many times I see things move too fast in a fic and it just seems like some sort of Disney style two day romance. Nice work on that.

The second is how much I really liked you subverting my expectation on how Sissi and Ulrich we’re going to be after Emily was exposed. I fully expected there to be a YxUxS love triangle and I love that it wasn’t even hinted at. Again, nice work.

Ok, first I’d like to say that I binged this in one day... second, what a story! I love what you did with Sissi. This is the only story that I’ve ever read (other than one of my own) where her and Yumi are portrayed as having reconciled and become good friends, and I really like and appreciate that. She gets so much hate normally...

It seemed like you left the story just before finishing the end, and I hope that maybe one day you will return to complete it. If not, I understand that life goes on and we leave things behind.

In my opinion though, I think that a T rating might have been warranted for Yumi having walked in on William and Emily about to get busy, and for the suicide and miscarriage. It’s not too bad though.

One last word though: if you changed the names and did a little proofreading, this could be a novel. I really do think it’s that good.

Boy smoke that Ulrich freak out was 100% On. The. Money. Absolutely believable. Good to see that both William and Emily got their just desserts.

The characters are so OOC it’s kinda ridiculous, but in an AU that’s allowed. Definitely a good read so far.

Best story ever

I am just re-reading this for the fifth time now I'm sure...still one of my favorite fics here on this site.

I love your story. This is the best story I have read on fan fiction. I love all the characters in this story.
You are an amazing writer. I know you are busy. But please update soon so that we do not have to wait for seven years . I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

Great story! Really awesome plot. I really like how the characters are in this story. I think they all couldn't have a better place than where they are now, in this story that is. Just one thing, I know you're busy, but you might want to check your sentences a bit better. Sometimes words are just missing and it gets confusing. But I really love this story. You thought of some great 'arcs'. I really admire your style of writing :)! So, awesome job so far :)!

Great chapter.

Oh wow. It's been so long since I've seen this story updated. I might have to reread some if it to remember what happened

WHAT THE FLUFF! dude this was awesome, i'mma gonna read it again hehe. I am so glad to see you wrote this chapter seeing as it has been three years since i last heard from you,but i understand your situation so take your time. but this was so CUTE! even though you almost gave me a heart attack when ulrich canceled on yumi and woke up late half the time for work, like oh you best not be cheating dude and now that they have finally agreed on how to balance work and soccer (by letting yumi take over hehehehehe) i think things will go smoothly so FANTASTIC WORK and i can't wait to hear from you again so good luck in your life and see you later, peace.

God I missed reading this story, short chapter but good. Good luck in grad school and I hope you update soon, if not I can understand why

i love this story are u going to discontinue this? i hope u don't. this fanfiction is my favorite so far .

So when can we expect an update on this? it's just getting good.

Are you still continuing? Really like it.