Reviews for In The Beginning
Xireana Prime chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
please update soon! this is the funniest thing since the invention of looney toons! love the story! please update asap! *giggle* brass eagle! giffaw*
BoredTech chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
lol, this was cute
Rose's.wings chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Ha, ha. That was really cool. I liked seeing how it all started, although I was confused with who was writing what text at the beginning. I really liked the ending paragraph too. It was just a nice way to put it. Very nice.
IronRaven chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
It always begins so innocently. A few well intentioned secrets. A small club with passwords and funny names. But sooner or latter, it always ends with gunfire and explosions. Or two roommates who are going to have strokes when they get the punchline.

Got a fuzzy spot on timing- this was when Sam and Mikela were in 11th grade. Assuming the Mission City was in the fall, then this puts Will getting almost-smooshed that spring, possibly even the first op after MC?

Nice to see Maggie coming back, even if only as a civilian contractor. And this raises a very interesting point- you've got the 'Bots still be treated as the big dark secret. Does this mean that signing on with NEST is a life time commitment? Or is it a "sworn to eternal secrecy when you leave" gig? Either way, with trashing the Egyptian cultural heritage, I'm not sure how long a secret can be kept.

Oh, and that dot-mil you gave... wrong branch. It would be airforce-dot-mil-foreslash-area51. And if you can get your DNS to find it, don't tell me! :)
yamiishot chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Excellent !
ZiMeep chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
This promises to be adorable! :)

p.s. read the darkside thing. thank god agreement. did we all need to see megatrons spine riped from his body! ew.

p.s.s. you could write a much better carly :) [as a friend!]

p.s.s.s. Bay you fragger you killed hyde TT

shuting up now. sorry for rant. luffs u gurlz :)
Holen-Snape chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I love the start up on the blog. The Daily Buzz is wonderful. Looking forward to anymore that you post. Thank you
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Loved this lots.
katy3meme chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Adorable. Mikaela takes on Morshower.

I just have to say THANK YOU for not letting DOTM influence you. I could ignore the plot holes in the first two movies and just enjoy them. This recent one was- disappointing.
Riptide2 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Oh My Gosh! I'll be randomly sniggering about this story for the rest of the week! Mikaela's username really is cute and I have to agree with her about Morshower, he is a little... SirYesSir for him is hilarious! It's interesting to know how Survivor and Spitfire got their start too and the names really do fit! I have to admit I would be stumped on how to appeal to Morshower's vanity too! I loved the ending, it was so sweet!

On a different topic, I really agree with your decision to not try and work in too much Dark of the Moon. I thought it was an okay movie by itself but it really pales in comparison to Revenge of the Fallen and don't think it fits well at all with the first two movies. It really shocked me that 1 the Autobots would be helping in human affairs and 2 that Optimus would kill not only his brother but Sentinel his mentor too!

Anyway, you'll have to excuse me now so I can roll on the floor laughing my head off at what Spitfire's reaction might be to being called Optimus' mom!
Fk306 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
this seems fun I look forward to more
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Curled up laughing, as per usual. Great job, guys.

Also, great call on the abyss of suckitude, AKA DOTM.
AcctClerk23 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I can see people using that address just for the kicks or to see what kind of people would try and email Mikeala XD

I really like this, it's got me curious about what gets posted on the Daily Buzz, which I'm pretty sure you guys have a fanfic for, so now I must hunt for it.
Kick-Aft chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Please excuse me while i fall out of my chair laughing. This is great! Hopefully there will be more? Cause i want to know how they decided that Ironhide should be NotTheToothFairy.

:)
Leighta Greenleaf chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
"Uncle William" ROLF! !/i
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