Great story! Very well written! You should make this more than a one-shot chapter. You have a great concept for a great story. Katara forced to marry a cruel and heartless ruler, to be used against her own people. Her hatred for him would grow to hugely in her unhappiness there in the fire nation (what if she got sick from her unhappiness and torment there). You should continue it!

This is a great story! Why didn't you make it longer than one chapter? Or write a sequel to it? You should continue it.

This is an excellent story! It has a lot of feeling in it. An it's well written. You should add onto it or do a sequel.

This is an excellent, excellent story! You should extend it or do a sequel to it.

u shuld rite moar. even tho it says complete, i think u shuld rite moar cuz its so kawaii 3333

I love this story! Can you create a sequel please? I really want to know what happens next!

This was beautiful in an upsetting way. I loved the mood.

This is facinating and I dearly wish there was more, oh well. Great fic!

Not sure how she was captured or why but still an interesting piece. Definitely dark.

This is an amazing oneshot. I kept reading it over and over and over. Very angsty and realistic. You should continue this...if you don't want to write a fanfic, maybe a two shot?

An interesting start, it definitely jumps right into the juicy stuff. However, I'm curious to see when and where this story departed from cannon or if, as I'm guessing, that it's a complete AU.

Looking forward to the next update!

Wow!this is promising!I'd really like to know where all this is going and I wanna know why Zuko is so cruel!

Update soon!

MOTAN

That was good. :)