its great keep going also i love the actions, i don't kinda like naruto being a useless brat here sometimes

The red sand sound familiar un

:) :) :) :) good job this was great!

You've probably already seen and know you are an amazing writer buuuut I LOVE this fic. It's seriously the best combo of romance and actual plot. Btw I had no idea I needed a green llama before this but I seriously do.

I swear if u turn this fanfic into based-of movie, it will be beyond awesome! Although those lemon-less plots kinda bothering me, it's a good chance to turn this into movie.
Those whole cursing through the story always make my day XD. I can't even stop laughing when it's already 2.30 in the morning in my country

'guess I was wrong about Asuma's death... Sorry TwT"
& well.. I kinda happy that sakura is being an Understanding girl(not some yandere bitch who's being selfish)

OMFG I LOVE THAT GREEN FREAKIN' LLAMA XD he's a cute-odd-grassy-hair-ball...i wanna hug him

& I know that Asuma will gonna die anyway. After all since fate decide hidan as his opponent,it's all already got confirmed

I kinda glad that the rival pairing wasn't naruhina. But seriously? Why should u make a rival pairing in here? Hopefully it's not narusaku

The Green llama the GREEN LLAMA

OMG! LMFAO geez that llama thing is so hilarious. I just stopped reading and laughed for about 10 minutes

Kaoru ? Hitachin kaoru you're talking about?

sorry I'm only leaving a review after I've finished, but this story was just too good to stop anywhere! Your o.c's were nicely developed, even if they weren't humongous to plot in all circumstances. The world and the agency you set up for the story was marvelous, and your attention to detail! You even thoroughly described the club that the characters would literally only be in for a moment, before almost dying, again. fight scenes are normally hard to write but you did them amazingly. overall this story was just really good! You managed to make a serious story and environment whilst also making light-hearted jokes and keeping the tension up. I'll definitely be checking out your other stories!

is it maybelline? thank god it isn't night that im reading because someone would think im a maniac for laughing so hard

*whistles* Maaan do I love you so much.. I reread this fic after a long while and it still made laugh with its light-hearted humor.. Idk if I've said this before but you should know this.. I LOVE YOUR FICS, YOUR WRITING, YOUR BEING! Thank you God for blessing this soul upon earth because I needed this and you've kinda become my mentor! Ehehe.. :) :3

omg okay, this is like Idk how many times I've read this beloved piece of art.. but I just had to tell you, at one point I read the whole thing to my mother and I totally forgot, but today my mom asked "Do you still have the story with the green llama? I loved that story you should read it to me." So here I am back again about to reread the whole thing to my mother. I wanted you to know my mother is also in love with this writing of yours.