I'm not a Shassie fan at all, but I like this story! It's well thought out and the progression makes sense. Keep up the good work!

Fugin yes, love the way you portray the characters

OMG! You just made the right comments! I mean, their conversation was just incredibly stupid and crazy, and I totally could imagine them saying it!
I am very scared for the next chapters. Until now Shawn had been very elusive, but the drama and the angst will hit soon, I can sense it... my poor baby

Poor Shawn! Those were good pancakes, too. Oh c'mon, we all know that's what he would've been thinking. Seriously! Don't look at me like that!

I love this! You've got some GREAT one-liners that made me laugh so hard! And the characters so SPOT ON! Loved it! :)

This was really good. Nice characterization, interesting storyline, not painfully cliche. I liked it. The ending was great, too. I just sort of sat there and pondered the last couple of sentences for a while. This one is definitely getting added to my favorites :)

I think I'm going to add this to my favs, it's too awesome not to! LOVE the end, love the whole thing but especially the end. Thanks for the journey!

GIVE INTO THE LOVE, CARLTON!
Cinnamon cupcakes? I don't even like cinnamon candy . . . I like cinnamon toast though.

KILL HIM CARLTON! KIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILL HIIIIIIIM!
There is a code of ethics in prison, namely, never touch/harm a child. Pedos who go to jail are sooooo f*cked . . . usually literally. And if you're a former cop? OOOOOOH MAAAAAAAN.
On second thought Carlton, don't kill him, he'll get what's coming to him.

RRRR, just want to get STILES!
I understand Shawn just wanting it to go away, unfortunately, stuff like that tends to fester.

Poor Shawn, poor, poor Shawn.
Yay for Lassiter here to save the day.

Great, great chappy. I understand Henry's reaction, most people get really pissed when they find out their child has been abused, even years later, even if their kid is an adult. I'm glad Shawn at least said something though. Man, now I'm really curious to see how he'll deal with this confrontation.
And now I want crepes so . . . thanks for that.

Eeeeeeeeeew . . . brains.
Good chapter, Carlton and Shawn having a serious conversation . . . weeeeird. I love it when Shawn can make Lassie blush though, cuteness!
Now I want cupcakes . . . so thanks for that.

Y'know I can relate to not wanting to write certain seasons. I'm a Supernatural Wincest fan (so I'm a perv, sue me) and I don't really like to go beyond season 2 at the moment because there just sooooo much baggage between the characters after that. I'm fortunate though, that if it comes to a different romantic relationship I can totally kill it in the story without a problem. Or ignore it. I've been ignoring Harry/Ginny for YEARS.
Anyhoo, I LOVE Henry and I liked the whole cover up with Stiles, I wouldn't have thought of it myself. This was a really good chapter!

I'm not really a big fan of case fics, if the case is part of the story without it BEING the story it's fine but not really a big case fic fan. This is actually cool though because it's not really a case fic it's a PERSONAL to SHAWN case fic in a way that leads to a whole dimension of hurt/comfort type of deal and I'm really liking that.
Gosh, you really, REALLY write Gus & Shawn well, you totally do. I'm jealous!