"One-shot" doesn't do this work of art any justice. Your writing is beautiful, and your imagery is creative and fresh and tantalizing. Not to mention... I'm also a sucker for Kohza :P haha. Very nicely done! I loved the Alabasta arc as well.

First things first:

That was the best fic I've read in a long time. It was short, but it really got to me. Great job.

I'm not sure what it is with your writing (and your art, just peeked into your dA gallery), but it's always really intense. In the good way. I guess I mean 'alive' more than 'intense'.

YES! *_*

Kohza is soooo conflicted it's like Kaku from CP9!...