| Reviews for A Child's Innocence |
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Wacko12 chapter 8 . 11/25/2017 I really hate that you killed Jolt |
Wacko12 chapter 19 . 8/20/2017 rest in peace Brains |
Wacko12 chapter 22 . 8/20/2017 should have added, "This is for Jolt, Flare-Up and Brains" |
Chloe Collins chapter 23 . 7/27/2017 Thank you for this beautiful story. Annabelles mind was fitting for a six-seven year old, something a lot of people seem to have trouble accomplishing. I enjoyed the scene with Kaela, Sam, and Wheelie. Wheelie would spoil the surprise, and having all the boys on the comm line chatting about her decision and even Wheeljack wanting to make something, and the summarized manner in which Wheelie relayed it all just came together in a way that I can't explain. I lOved it. Once again, thank you for this story. 3 Pho |
Pho chapter 21 . 7/27/2017 And now a human on the field knows (despite several previous hints) that Annabelles on the battle field, and they can save her before she DIES OF TRAUMATIC INJURIES |
Guest chapter 20 . 7/27/2017 Annabelle! Everyone knows you tear at the wires then jam it in when you see scp plant or Energon line. :) |
AncientPhoenix chapter 19 . 7/27/2017 I feel like Wheelie should have died. Maybe Brains lived on and grew to like her or maybe not, maybe he still does, but I feel like Wheelies time had come. |
Pho chapter 18 . 7/27/2017 Thank you thank you thank you thank you! Wheeljack lives! Now he can get his inventions exploding once more. |
Pho chapter 16 . 7/27/2017 Nooooooøöòoooóôõoooooo. Annabelle dont |
Pho chapter 13 . 7/27/2017 Poor Annabelle. Don't let them hurt her. She was so heartbroken when she thought... Why Jolt? Jolt is that quiet studious person who holds great wisdom though rarely interacts with others. Why kill him? But this fight, it means something. The other fights always had a purpose, but it was strategic, military. Political. This fight is personal. You don't mess with the Autobots. |
Pho chapter 11 . 7/27/2017 Evil. Evil |
Pho chapter 10 . 7/27/2017 I can still remember my utter disappointment, thinking this was the last movie, and that the humans would just barely triumph, only to never see their friends again as they blasted into space. Then they were hit, and I knew there was a plan. Hopefully little Annabelle doesn't take it to hard |
Phoenix chapter 7 . 7/27/2017 Go Annabell! Ironhide can add "Attacked Laserveak with a stick" right below "Played tag with Barricade" to his list of why Annabells the best charge ever |
Pho chapter 6 . 7/27/2017 I always wondered what the deal with Dutch was. |
Phoenix chapter 5 . 7/27/2017 Papa Ironhide. The scene were SAM tries to get into Nest is probably my favorite from the movie. Not sure you quite did it justice, though you made up for it with Chromias monologue |