Reviews for Fallen Apart
Mrs.Chaton chapter 16 . 12/30/2017
Wait no I need more
RemyLeBeauThief chapter 16 . 10/27/2013
Glad to see u continued this one had to reread the entire thing but still loved it waiting for more.
Canonball12 chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Awesome write more please
Guest chapter 13 . 3/24/2013
For the love of god please post more
J Elise chapter 13 . 11/24/2012
OMG! AWESOME chapters :)! Loved seeing my fav charachter (Jubilee) and I think you worked her in very well. I can't wait to see what happens when Gambit goes after Storm, and what Victor might have to do with her 'recovery'. You capture Remy's plight so well, and I absolutely LOVE the characterization. Thank you for taking the time to write this :) It turned out beautifully! Can't wait to read any future chapters :)
JasmineBella chapter 13 . 11/24/2012
Loved both chapters! Can hardly wait to see what is up with Rogue!
J Elise chapter 11 . 10/11/2012
Yay! It's been awhile since you updated :) Love the interplay between Gambit and X-23 :) Very well written!
J Elise chapter 10 . 5/3/2012
I have to admit it...you're keeping me coming back for more :) The idea of the prison camps has always intrigued me. It'll be interesting to see how this break goes. I hope as time goes on we'll start to see more X-men come out of the woodwork. Loved the interaction with Kurt and Logan! Keep it up :)
compulsive chapter 7 . 12/11/2011
Really nice writing. The story moves slowly but it's not boring at all. I really enjoy your ability to describe the actions and places and your characterization.

And your drugged Remy is fantastic :)
freakinaforest chapter 6 . 12/4/2011
Really liking this fic so far, and bringing in Sayuri/Chiyo (Memoirs of a Geisha reference by any chance?) was an unexpected twist. Looking forward to more chapters.
Anon chapter 6 . 12/4/2011
I want to like this story, but I'm just very confused.
Christie chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Please keep updating. You have strong writing skills!
SpaceManInc chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Good Job ...Well writing

Really got into his head

Well I'm making a story an X men story and i need everyone's help

the way to help is to Complete the Mutant application. I need OC's and just complete the application and post it as a review
JJ Rust chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Excellent job of getting into Gambit's head and showing how much these experiences have changed him. Obviously he misses his old self, but this new Gambit is going to be needed more for the conflict ahead.

Keep up the good work.