| Reviews for The Orteig Prize |
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   echotheinferno chapter 8 . 12/4/2012 awesome story, sounds like something deryn would do:) |
| thedarkenchanter63 chapter 8 . 9/29/2012 Cool story. The plot was acceptable, but could have used more action. I loved the fluff chapter, you should have written more. I like your writing style, too. The characters were very canon and well- written. All in all, a pretty good story. Note: Please don't hate me for criticizing your story. Best wishes, TDE |
| Clockwork Witch chapter 8 . 4/20/2012 the end? heak no! There will be more! Please! |
| hamaiasa chapter 8 . 8/19/2011 awesome ending to an awesome story :D I love it! |
| theprinceofparties chapter 8 . 8/18/2011 "Well of course it's impressive! Haven't you learned that I don't do anything that isn't?" THAT is brilliant! They should just make that Deryn's official slogan and be done with it xD It's perfect. And I thought it was really sweet how Alek was so determined to be awake the entire time. well, I guess it would be kind of dumb for him to take a nap otherwise, but it's still sweet :3 Excellent job overall! I really enjoyed reading this! |
| Frogster chapter 8 . 8/18/2011 I liked how you did scenes by the hours in the last chapter, and how you alternated between Alek and Deryn's viewpoints. That kept the story flowing smoothly without being too long or too short. Great job! Although I wish you'd written a chapter about the reception for Deryn ;) Write more soon! |
| silverspigot chapter 8 . 8/18/2011 AMAZING! I love it! Nice ending. A bit short, but doesn't stop to get to the point :) |
| Fuhreesha chapter 6 . 8/17/2011 Nice! I love this so far. C: Please continue! :D |
| theprinceofparties chapter 6 . 8/13/2011 I must say I like Annie. She's pretty boss. Ack, it's getting so exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| maximumride123 chapter 6 . 8/11/2011 Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
| ReadySetJett chapter 6 . 8/11/2011 :D I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! lol I keep expecting to crash or something |
| silverspigot chapter 6 . 8/11/2011 Yay! But I'm a bit sad that this is ending... |
| v.ren55 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 I love the plot, love Alek and Deryn's relationship. Everything. Keep it up! |
| theprinceofparties chapter 5 . 8/5/2011 SO glad I finally found time to catch up on this. You are a BRILLIANT writer! Chapter 3 was hilarious, chapter 4 was delectable, if a little brief xD And this last one... haha, wow, I almost pity that poor bastard. But he completely deserved it. That was rich! I love it! Looking forward to the rest of this! I won't let myself fall behind again, that's for sure. |
| ReadySetJett chapter 5 . 8/5/2011 LINDBERGH YOU IDIOT. U DUN KNOW SHE IS ENGAGED TO ALEK? LOLOLOL. I loved the fluff in the previous chapter too but this made me lol |
