Update pls! I lov great writers

An immersive, compelling fic. Sakura's loss of identity and direction were really believable and sad to read. I'm So glad she was able to start rebuilding the connections with her friends. The constant, almost mental presence of Naruto, despite his physical absence from the story was masterfully written. Thank you for writing x

I don't know if you have plans of updating this, but it really could stand alone as its own one shot. It's that good. The characterization is excellent, the journey is just... magnificent. All very well written, feeling like some of the sadder chapters from the manga, but legit. I love it all.

your story gave me emotional breakdown. but, this is really good. you inspired me to write *cheers*

Sooo, is Naruto missing, dead or something?

Well that ruined my day. Actually, no, it was beautiful and so well written that I'm left wondering how to be as good a writer as you are. Talk about gorgeous language, painting a picture, painting FEELINGS. You didn't just show us feelings, you gave us the feelings to share with Sakura. Phenomenal job on this fic. Absolutely phenomenal. But it made me rly sad. Thank you for writing something so hauntingly beautiful. Let me point out some of the things I loved about it before I wrap up this review xD. I loved how slowly you pieced her understanding of the world together, how much she felt that things were familiar and DID things that were familiar without being conscious of them immediately. By leaving us in the dark, you showed us how in the dark she was. You really did a great job of that by leaving the story so mysterious as well. I wasn't sure what to think about the Icha Icha book or what role Sasuke played/would play. There were (and still are) so many uncertainties that it all feels real, like a whole, developed world. What we see here is all we have. That is shockingly sad but so very incredible and deep. Great, great job. I also loved how much Naruto was there but not. How even in the beginning, she was drawn to him in so many ways. His apartment. His smell. Ramen. Then when the name finally appears, it sweeps her away with it because they were so, so close. And you never even go into the details of just how close here in this timeline of yours. But we feel how intrinsically connected their hearts were through her desperate longing. You described it all so well, too. The way nothing felt real but Naruto-because her heart was his, and if her heart was real, so was he. AH. I'm dying here man. Great read. Thanks for writing!

Wow I really love reading super long NaruSaku fics. This one really moved me to tears, you did a great job writing the emotions of each character! I really want Naruto back though :( Hope you can post the next chapter soon!

Well that was depressing.

Beautiful. But depressing nonetheless.

And very enjoyable.

i could have stopped reading at the part where i figured that naruto died. and i did. but then i had to continue because:
1. i thought he might be back.
writing is so good
3. i had to take deep breaths whenever he was mentioned
4. i silent-cried and i dont know why did i take your story so seriously.

questions:
the key that tsunade gave to sakura, did she find the door or its gonna be in the next chapter?

anyways
i hate you for killing characters, yet i still read the long chapter.
did you cry while writing this?

plz bring naruto back to life.

I can't believe I've never read this story of yours... It was so endearing that as I kept reading, I started crying my eyes out. Just the way you write is so beautiful, I could feel the emotions in your writing. Definately one of the best writers of this site. If you do ever finish this story I would ever be so great full but if you don't, that's ok too because like you said, this chapter can stand on its own.

Thanks for writing!

WHAT THE FUCK WHAT WHAT WHAT OMG THIS IS THE MOST DEPRESSING THING IVE EVER READ I CANT BELIEVE IM CRYING IM ANGRY AT YOU FOR MAKING ME CRY AUTHOR-SAN I CANT
I'm just gonna curl up in ball in a corner ok because it hurts to even

Sad but great story hope you can continue it.

i should say this is the most well written story i had ever read..even though it was a sad story,,its just perfect...yes..it was worth my time,,thank you for making this story,,i really really loved it!

-.- i just cant get over how sad this story was!sorry but i lovedit really! its just its so sad!:(
your are an effective writer you know?:)

I am absolutely speechless... That was an stunning piece of writing. I can't even put into words how impressed I am - I always thought that a really good piece of writing is one that leaves a lasting mark on you, and what you've written here definitely has achieved that. I think you're one of the best (if not THE best) writers that I have come across in this fandom. Very, very well done. :)

Wow you are making me cry! The feelings are just so raw, I was sniffing so much my mom asked me what was wrong.