Great story, I read it in one go. I liked it was positive and happy. It is one of of my favorite fanfic stories.

outstanding story... with a happy ending.. my favorite kind... don't get me wrong.. love angst and the chaos of unhappy endings.. but happy endings give me a glimmer of hope ... thanks for having written this.

wow... my jaw is on the ground... wow

Thanks for writing this. It's great :)

I just wanted to take a second to say I really really loved this chapter. I know it wasn't even naomily based but it was really fucking well writes and you appreciate the struggle em goes through all the more underwater. For some reason I feel like deciding if she should tell naomi by talking to cat and Ef is probably my favorite dialogued scene by far so really really good job(: great story

Nice imagery, I'm into it. It Sets a good tone. Picturing Emily coming out of the waves and that look, it feels like one of "those moments", one you know will linger in your mind forever; the place you go when you just want to be blissful for a moment.

This was a fabulous read... Thank you

Xxx

This fic is so fucking perfect :)

Hypes never disappoints!3

Why must they all end ;-; -bangs head against wall-

Im on the great search for tissues I feel horrible about Effy's situation god ;-; 3 fucking years, hell I would have killed my self seeing all of that happen to the person I love, them rejecting me flirting with about every guy she saw gah!

I had been waiting for this all to play out XD Katie fucking fitch we all fucking love you! Keffy and naomily ftw!

Aww i really wanted to read more Keffy, like what Anthea would say about their relationship, she'd probably be ecstatic lol. And i wanted Katie to go on the missions with them too, to be there with Effy and to show that she can handle all that because she's tough and she's Katie Fucking Fitch. It would have been awesome to see Katie being all bad ass on those ninja missions. I really really hope you write more, especially more Keffy, you're a great writer. :D

Aww i loved Katie actually being brave and just telling her family outright about her and Effy. I really loved that Rob welcomed Effy with open arms and already saw her as part of the family even before he found out about her and Katie. And i really really loved Katie and Naomi bonding over their worry for the women they love. :D

Omg the scenes between Katie and Effy were so frikkin romantic it was beautiful. Wow. Wow. I know this is mostly a Naomily fic and i love them and all but Keffy is definitely my favourite part of this fic. And freddie was a douche and totally deserved that.