Damn, that was deep.

dude. I love this so much.

This was a very different read. I found it an interesting take on a classicay hated pairing. Nevertheless, I enjoyed this. Keep writing!

Nice.

Why do you write so perfectly?

/Jealous/

Daaaaamn, son.

One word: Bravo. This was really something. :)

It's almost poetic. Simply impressive. Love it.

I have now read this story at least 10 times and every single time I read it, I love it a little more

I love it! It was really good. Keep writing!

Wow.

Wow.

Wow.

Wow.

(What I think about your story.)

Thank you.

(For putting this up.)

Deep.

Amazing.

Different.

(Describing this.)

Wow.

(Again...)

Thank you.

(For giving Fanfiction a good name.)

Love.

(Your story.)

I wish...

(That I was as good a writer as you...)

Wow! I've always hated anti lissa fics. (after all we know nothing about her other than that he dated Fang) I really liked this. It showed things from her point of view.

I'm too shallow to stop hating her, but I am deep enough to applaud you for this. I think the reason people make Lissa a slut is because she probably barely even knew him and made out with him. I understand that it's hard to not want to kiss Fang, but you have to have some self-control.

Things I just love about this:

I love the ending, but not for what you think. I love the personification of his eyes to what she's killing herself with. Plus, the title actually had something to do with the theme of the story. And how his lies are like knives is just great. It's really deep and emotional. You know, there was one point in time where I had a story that is now taken off because, well, let's just say it was my first. But, my point is, is in mine Lissa only acted the way she did because her parents were never around, and she wanted attention. You sorta did what I did. I think that would be a way to make this one-shot even better than it already is. In one of the lies, you could mention something bad that's going on in her life. She is already a deep character with feeling, now give her a brief background to justify those feelings. That is just a little Fu structure criticism. I am addind this to my favorites, because you don't see many fan fictions like this AND it had fax.

Wow. I have never seen anything that talked about Lissa and Fang's relationship like this. I applaud you for writing something like this about a so-often-misunderstood minor character!

~CWB

Uh, geez, you're kind of a fantastic author, have I mentioned that before? )

I really enjoy reading stories about Lissa that actually delve into her character. Every story nowadays shows her as some whore who steals Fang away, and that she's a bitch and a stuck-up brat. If you go back in the books, all she did was kiss Fang, have a pleasant conversation (on her part) with Max, and...that's it.

I liked this a lot!

Whoa, this is actually the first time I felt bad for Lissa. I've never hated her but didn't like her either. It's amazing how fanfic writers like you are able to expand so much about characters the writer hardly even mantions. Good job and write on!