I liked the idea of Snape reminiscing, even though that seemed to waiver in style, I found this read very enjoyable

Lovely! And hot ;)
A couple of odd rogue apostrophes and grammar/spelling bits, as I see you said other people have already mentioned, but other than that, the best fic I've read in a long time! Nice characterisation, good scene-building, and of course, excellent smut!

i love a good sev hermione but some I just find it hard to believe a young girl would be in love with him forever

So happy we got a new chapter! Thank you c:

Can’t wait for more!

Please continue

This is wonderful, and so well done! Please please please do keep going. A truly brilliant story! (I'll be keeping my fingers crossed for a happy end for them, instead of canon-ending.)

Amazing story I enjoyed it very much. Snapws thoughts of Hermione are so interesting and sweet and he is so obsessing over her that's the best somewhat I just like these kind of storys I'm odd like that ;-p, please more soon that would be great. *cookies for your inspiration*

Finally. Hope that yours writing block is over. Finish that this is amazing story truly.

Yay, finally another update, was worried that overall this would be abandoned. Always liked this story due to your unique twists of the interactions between the pair. Considering you do stay close to canon, I am curious to see how the death of Dumbledore and the deathly hallows play out (still wishing to see Hermione take the task 8nstead of Sev lol)

Yay finally the story gets updated haha. Remember going back many years for this, hope the updates can continue :) At least she knows what’s going to happen... haven’t done this yet, but will finally follow. Love the twists and variations u have plopped into your story so far

that was hot...is Dumbledore going to keep cockblocking them in the future? I mean that would be a bit like closing the barn door after the horses have bolted, but Dumbledore finds odd things funny...

SO...did they actually use any preventative measures so that she doesn’t become pregnant before the war is over or were they just too overwhelmed with each other that they forgot?

Maybe during DH Severus and Hermione could have journals that are keyed to each other, so that Hermione doesn’t have to completely depend on Phineas for information about what all is going on at Hogwarts...

Anyway I just started reading this today and I enjoyed it and I hope that you’ll update it soon...

Please continue!

This was beautiful

I’m jumping for joy- they kissed and he’s not going to deny his feelings any more