Nnnooo, he was about to confess his love!
Great job on the story, I always wondered what happened after the storm and would love that this contribute to the actual manga/anime. Love it!

Please please please write a sequel! You did such an amzing job extending this scene (that was all know was lacking) and there are so many more you could play with too! Please write some more, you're an awesome writer!

That was excellent. Very well-written. I especially liked this bit: "The one that was not Hikaru was Kaoru, and the one that was not Kaoru was Hikaru. And the one that was neither Hikaru nor Kaoru… was Haruhi." An interesting view, which I quite enjoyed.

I'm not really sure what else to say about it. I'm having trouble putting my appreciated into words due to the fact that it's one o' clock in the morning. Sorry.

Really, really great little fic. ]

I already commented on dA, but this deserves another review because I love it so much. :)

Thanks for posting it here, it's going into my faves.

-Skye

mmmmoooorrrreee! pllleeaasse!