Loved it!

Strange, beautiful and perfect.

Beautiful

this...was really sad. for so many reasons and i loved it. do i wish it ended differently? Hell yes! but thats why its so good because it didn't conform to my wishes and it brought a reaction out of me, so kudos to you~

I feel like I missed something at the end.

I know you wrote this forever ago but I just found it and wanted to say I love it. :D So dark and wonderful. Thank you for writing and posting!

An absolutely amazing story! Loved it. It made me wish to know so much more about Bella's backstory...

Wow! That was brilliant! I can't even begin to imagine where you came up with this story, but I loved it and plan to read it again and again. Thank you!

What did she do to be stuck in this Hell she has found herself in?

Wow, that was fucked up and wonderful. Great job.

This is hauntingly beautiful. Loved it. 'Deathless' suits Bella very well. Would love to know who cursed her this way...but anyways violence and bruises? Gorgeous. Thank you.

intriguing, your mind must be a dark crazy place ;) i love what you come up with

That was an amazing idea, well written, too!
a lovely one-shot, although I would like to know what she is. why she doesn't die.
this story has potential for a sequel. I would surely read it if you ever write it.
This "deathless" characteristic sure does suit Bella really well. And her being the one to break the major makes sense! good job!

i'll admit, usually i'm not a HUGE fan of these kind of dark fics, but this was wonderful. it was surprisingly beautiful and poignant while not being horrifying - though dark, the horror in it wasn't for shock factor, and i think that's why the dark content of it works. i love the jasper/bella dynamic in this, the analogies...gorgeous.

Yes, that was dark…but dark, grim things are what I love to read the most. I think it might stem from the fact that my father allowed me to read his Stephen King books when I was nine. Ever since then, the grimmer and gorier, the more I love them. So this was a wonderfully written fic. The concept was brillant and I hope to see more in the future.