Not believable. You keep going too far. A lot of this just wouldn’t be accepted. It’s too much too fast. No community would

Look I think you should put in Constructive Criticism too. Because I do flame people not gonna lie. But I also leave constructive Criticism. Like I read a book where he/she/they where using mundane money in the wizarding world. So I kindly gave them some constructive Criticism. See I usually flame people when they are being cocky. However I sometimes get mad a go off a tangent and I understand that it's not okay.

Hi Oh All Powerful Divine Ru- oh wait. Hi, Harry.
Haha love this whole all-powerful bit, and the Ron and Dumbledore bashing, too.

Blood is ticker than water indeed...Great story! Loved it

The fuck? Voldyshorts married McGonnagal? This is a really weird Bizarro world you’ve written, it’s entertaining because of how wrong that stuff is, you might have stated people would be OOC but even so you really made some of them quite weird. This isn’t going to get a favorite, frankly your writing isn’t that good. It lacks the proper flow, is how best I can describe it.

This is a seriously odd Fic, IF you hadn’t continually mentioned how OOC characters would be I’d be upset. That said you really didn’t need to kill Sirius.

Okay wasn’t expecting Hermione to be Neville’s sister. That’s just weird.

A helpful Umbridge?! I think I’ve seen it all now.

I thought Panda was one of those who cursed Luna. I really doubt if this Harry is the forgive and forget type. Although I do like the spin on Severus and Doris.

This is going to be weird with Umbridge being nice
I love your storys so I'll give this a try

I just started reading this like not even 1 word of the story just the disclaimer
I love it the most amazing disclaimer ever

That was so good

Great story

very nice and well written story,

this was great I loved it