I think you could have put a little more Eli drama in that chapter maybe even have Gibbs and Eli get into it more than so then they did

I think you had Eli give up to easily you could have spun out a plot twist where Eli tries to kidnap the child or even kill Rizzo to get ziva rough come back to Posada

Great story love it

Cute story. My favorite bit was probably Joana (Shannon's Mom.) That was cute. K

In spite of the abrupt ending, this was a really great story. I wish you'd finished it before the epilogue. I did find your authors' notes rather annoying though. Everything to random stuff that had nothing to do with the story to continually saying that your story was wasn't good. It was, but no matter how good it is, people won't want to read things the owner itself thinks isn't good. I would; however, like to offer some advice. There are many spelling, context, punctuation, and grammar. I suggest more carefully proofreading your work and possibly getting a beta reader to help with this. These easily fixed things are even more frustrating when it's as great of a story as this one.

Jethro forgot Jenny's birthday? Shame on him! He didn't even get her a gift.

"I want to spend the rest of my life correcting your idioms." ...LOL!

I LOVED YOUR STORIES PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, JIBBS & GIBBLETS STORIES, THX

OMG I LOVED THIS! You're such an amazing writer pleaseeee write more! :) I got soo into this story I started to believe it... Missed NCIS for 2 weeks and I just started watching it a few mins ago & during the theme song I'm like 'where the hell is Jenny? ...oh wait... She's still dead. *sad face* '

I love love love it. I always felt Jenny & Jethro loved each always, but i think she felt she had to try to prove to her she is very capable of doing both. I love your screen name. Im Holly Tux we had a bad thunderstorm, in NJ. and we couldnt get me a a sreen name, please write some more jen and jethro fan fictions .I love them. Keep up the good work. my name is Theresa. i loyal fan.

Congrats on finishing this - a huge accomplishment! And a very sweet ending. I'm so glad Jenny and Gibbs got their second chance - and a huge family! Well done. :)

I'm so glad Gibbs outsmarted her (not that I doubted it!). Poor Jenny thinking he was doing nothing to save their child but it all worked out. Great job!

Good move calling Gibbs on speed dial. Well done, Jenny! This is great - Gibbs can try to find redemption - he couldn't save his last wife and daughter but maybe he can with this set.

Oh Jenny, why didn't you call your husband? You definitely built up the tension!

Uh oh...knew it all seemed a bit too good to be true. Poor Jenny!