Beautifully written.

There was nothing I didn't love about this story!

First of all, it was unbelievably hot and wonderful. There are far too few Helen/John stories out there, and even less good ones. This just might be my absolute favourite Sanctuary fanfic. John and Helen were portrayed with precision, with just enough of the 'real' them and the 'out of blue' them. In fic, they are often unwittingly reduced to cardboard images with the same looks but none of the contents. But here, they were full of history, emotions and character. Their history and love were almost tangible in this story (as well as in the other stories of the same universe). Will and Abby were adorable and I couldn't stop laughing every time they were beying voyeuristic. Abby was especially adorable with her internal monologue and exclamations.

This is an amazing fic, and I hope you write more Sanctuary stories because I will definitely read them.

Wowie, talk about some smoking hot chapters! The Zimmermans' reactions were hilarious.

this is hilarious! love how you included James. U wish Ashley or Kate but mostly Ashley was in it.

Hahaha! I love how you put humor in the relationship between Helen and John, it's really cute. And I agree with the previous review about adding back story to Will and Abby. You don't just focus on Helen and John's relationship you also include other relationships as well and tie them in.

You also make Abby into a really strong character here and give her the lead when it comes to her and Will and I like that. She's not just another blonde, which is refreshing.

I'm really sad that this is the last chapter, I really liked reading this story. But I'll just have to focus on your new one.

Keep it up, can't wait to read more from you. Please don't stop writing.

Ok will give this one warning: Don;t drink or eat while reading this story.

I sat down and didn't even realize my coffee was finished until I looked down into my cup. I was that absorbed in the story. Going to read your last chapter.

I feel really sorry for Will. Okay not really. Lucky bastard got to see everything, who would complain about seeing someone as hot as Helen Magnus doing that deed.

Well maybe Druitt isn't his type of guy.

Really cute chapter 3 there.

You got me hooked like phonics on your story. I'm really glad I found your stories here, I think theyre really adorable and stuff.

Sanctuary just got steamy. You bring up a really great taboo of voyeurism here and you really put alot of thought into the characters.

Good job.

Finally a long chaptered series from you. I've been waiting for you to post one like this.

Kinda choppy at first, but it really does smooth out.

It's OVER! OH'S NO! :'(

MS

Love it, are you going to write more?

Haha, lol! The way Will found out was so perfect and fit with the voyeuristic nature of the story ;). Great final chappie.

greetings from one of your german readers,

this was as much fun to read as it had to be for you while writing.

Especially the moment Will realizes that the Druitts are married.

Amazingly funny and entertaining story, really!

Oh. Wow. HOTTTTTTT! And funny how Will and Abby are envious of John and Helen, but let's face it, there's no one hotter than those two. One can't help but be envious... I'll be waiting for more!