He cames that fast?

- aw.

nice chapter, when will continue?

This story was very good. The characters were believable and your portrayal of the both of them was outstanding. It's brilliant how well you can get into a characters head and grasp all of the correct things that they would do and say. I especially liked how (I'm not a Rei hater!) you had Rei die and that was the reason for Saya being so unstable. A proper reason, and that made it twice as good. Your grammer, from what I've seen, is perfect and you obviously checked it through very well! :)

The only two things that I would say is that the actual sex scene was a little short and a little rushed, but from you gave your audience to read, you were intending not to go into that much detail. Well, that's what I gathered anyways. ;)

That, and when someone says a new sentence, then you must start on a new line. If you don't, it makes your overall presentation look scruffy and unattractive and people won't be as keen to read it. The countless stories that I'm sure were great, but I didn't read because they lacked proper format... It's rather sad.

Anyways, I hope to see more from you. Thank you for writing something for this couple because the count of stories for these two is incredibly scarce! And I love this couple! T-T

Keep writing!

~Jess~