Amazing...
So amazing!

I read the story to the tempo of the song Me and Mr Wolf. Nice horror.

wow...this was deep as well as beautiful and deep. I am usually not that big a fan of poetry when it comes to telling a story, but you and one other person have managed to get past that bias. I love everything about this. The meter was great, and you managed to keep a rhyme without it seeming like you were straining to do so. I also love, and mean love, the little explanation at the end for why America get England the key in the first place. It really showed how far and deeply that England was obsessed with getting America to love him that he would force that connection. Amazing job, truly.

You are really good with poems.

My god thus is freaky.

i love you!

I love this! Although it sounded like 2p!England, especially with the sweets. XD

This is Epic i honestly have no other words for it!

O.O Well that was...interesting. I actually did enjoy this. Iggy's view on this fic was really creepy and I loved it!

Lol Awww I can so see a crazy UK going after US like that X3 It's adorable if you ask me :D :D US will love him no matter what! :D lol And it's ok I'm not really into poetry anyway """

*innocent face* Was it bad i was laughing through the whole thing? :3

This was creepy and very obsessive. And...I LOVED IT. ;) I have to make it known that I love the idea of an obsessive England, it's one of my favorite interpreations of him. Y'know, next to him actually getting to be the seme for once.

But now I am just rambling and wasting your precious time. Please ignore me, I just was lost by the epic-ness of the poem/fic that I have to let my thoughts out about it. *Turns to a random dude sitting at a table close to mine and proceeds to ramble to him*

o.o creepy. nice poem, somehow, it gave me a humourous feel. probably because imagining arthur and his massive eyebrows obsessing over america is funny to me. idk why. *thumbs up*

That was awesome! Keep writing poetry. :)

That was so twisted and epic and I loved it!~