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Hikaru69 chapter 1 . 4/4 I've just started reading it again, and just like the first time, it's still very good even today. Hopefully you'll do more updates in the future, but till then, I'll enjoy the chapters you've got up now. Onward and upward, to the next chapter I go. |
tiffanyd090 chapter 17 . 8/17/2019 Just finished your story and loved it ! |
Predamorpher chapter 17 . 2/23/2019 I love this story please continue it honestly it storys like this that keep me alive as im always depressed and thinking of suicide but when I read story's like this I'm always happy i found it because if I was dead then I wouldn't be able to support these stories my only compliant about this story is the typos the misspelled words but other than that this is a beautiful story and as for your question I think it should be a xeno female and when aubry and her mate have thier baby it should Be a xeno male |
Guest chapter 17 . 1/26/2019 Hello... Please update... |
oddest zombie chapter 17 . 10/22/2018 humanoid girl (my avatars on games tend to be girls) |
oddest zombie chapter 2 . 10/15/2018 u could use something more maybe another pairing between a human and xenomorph other than ur current two most likely with a guy that kills his captors then escapes only to get captured by the xenomorphs before he breaks out and slaughters a few of them before they can subdue him |
jeanadele chapter 17 . 9/26/2018 She should have a humanoid girl or maybe twins one humanoid and the other Xeno |
Guest11347 chapter 17 . 9/15/2018 I'm loving this story...please make more chapters and maybe she could have twins.(_~) |
Guest chapter 16 . 9/2/2018 Loving this story |
Guest chapter 17 . 9/2/2018 U alive |
Guest chapter 17 . 8/14/2018 I love this story so much. It's been about a year since your last update, but I can understand why that might be. Just know that I'm checking up on this story every month or so. |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/23/2018 Update please! |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/20/2018 Hi! Thank you for the update... I hope you can continue writing the story... I hope the baby will be twins, a boy and a girl hybrid. Human in outer appearance with a strength of a xeno. Sort of they can change their appearance having a tail, another pairs of hands but can hide it as well... can blend with humans as well as to the xeno. They can build also an underground hive for more security... I'm looking forward for the next update... Please be inspired to finish the story... It's just so amazing story... |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/14/2018 Great story so far |
TehAngryXeno chapter 17 . 3/2/2018 OVERALL REVIEW SO FAR: I have sincerely enjoyed this story, though I do have some complaints you should definitely work on in the future: 1) There are MANY typos and grammatical errors throughout each chapter and sometimes it made me cringe trying to figure out what you meant to say; make sure you proof read your chapters many times before publishing. 2OPINION] The relationship between our main Protagonists was too rushed; I prefer a slow and properly built up relationship, but definitely not milked/dragged on. 3) The scenery and settings of places and especially the Lemon scene(s) need to be more detailed and need to be elongated more; I have a lot of trouble picturing what you, the Author wanted us to imagine. (Unless you did not explain a lot on purpose so that we readers can imagine our own things) And to answer your suggestion! It would be most scientifically accurate, for the baby to be a full Xenomorph in appearance (I am sure Xeno’s genes and phenotypes are much more dominant than that of puny humans) But of course, you could make the Xeno have human personality traits to follow this up. As for the sex of the baby...I reckon it would be proper for it to take on that of a male, considering the personalities of the parents are demanding and not quite so patient. Call me sexist, but Males generally can take more of a beating than females from their parents. And that’s about it! On a side complaint not relating directly to the story, you need to come back and update why you have been hiding from the Audience. Don’t take this personally, but it is quite rude to just leave without a trace; giving us some closure would be nice. I hope you come back to this story or even make a sequel, because O see great potential in it and I personally enjoy it...but it has been almost a year without any word from you and that is unacceptable. You need to come back and tell us what is going on. |