| Reviews for Lost Bet |
|---|
Rachel chapter 1 . 9/24/2016 "You'll have to read to find out" is almost as shitty as "I suck at writing summaries". Its like asking me to buy a product before telling me what it does. In this situation instead of paying with money I am paying with time. Its a really stupid and manipulative way to get out of writing an actual summary. Fun fact! Almost every HATES that kind of cop out. |
Totalfangirl01 chapter 1 . 12/17/2014 Wow...Sam wearing a dress? With make-up? And heels?! Okay, I seriously need an aspirin... Anyway...that was cutely amazing! :3 :D |
Cartwheellou chapter 1 . 10/12/2014 Hahahahaha! Sam in high heels! I would pay to see that! |
BrightRaven -chris210racer chapter 1 . 9/17/2012 okay too fast much too fast.*vomits* sorry *vomits again for real in real life* (vomit thing was true) |
GothicWolfDream chapter 1 . 1/4/2012 cute 3 |
Sincerely The Sign Painter chapter 1 . 12/30/2011 This was all part of Tucker's plan, wasn't it. Cute story. Sincerely The Sign Painter |
FReeTOBeMe1311 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 I loved it It was soooo cute immature have to do that to two people I know see how well it works lol |
Tori Stone chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 CUTE (: I loved it! It's so them (: |
Sleeping Kangaroo chapter 1 . 7/16/2011 A bit quick, but sweet. Nice. Fluffy. I like it! |
Danny Phantom Phanatic chapter 1 . 7/14/2011 Poor Danny lost to his hormones. Its about time he goes with his feelings tho, he just needed an extra push. haha love the story! |
Hepf chapter 1 . 7/11/2011 I'm no english teacher, but I would like to give a few pointers I learned from school. I loved the whole plot line, but I think the kiss was too rushed into. When you get to the end of a story, and you want the characters to kiss, you don't want to just say "they kissed". You want to put more feeling into it. For instance I would have said this: "Sam lost her grip on my desk, falling into my lap. She slowly looked up at me with her beautiful eyes, our noses touching. Without thinking, I filled the gap between our lips." Just saying that's how I'd do it. I'm not flaming because I LOVED the story. Just thought I'd give some helpful pointers for future stories :) |
tykronos chapter 1 . 7/11/2011 tucker foley will die! but still, AWWWWW! keep writing my friend. |
aslan333 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011 good job. |
Awsomaniatica chapter 1 . 7/8/2011 Ha ha ha... loved every minute of it! Too cute! |
Jazzy Girl kataanglover chapter 1 . 7/8/2011 awwwww that is too sweet (not really no story is too sweet)but quite a couple times i think you forgot to put a word in other then that Awesome |