Reviews for Lost Bet
Rachel chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
"You'll have to read to find out" is almost as shitty as "I suck at writing summaries". Its like asking me to buy a product before telling me what it does. In this situation instead of paying with money I am paying with time. Its a really stupid and manipulative way to get out of writing an actual summary. Fun fact! Almost every HATES that kind of cop out.
Totalfangirl01 chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Wow...Sam wearing a dress? With make-up? And heels?!
Okay, I seriously need an aspirin...
Anyway...that was cutely amazing! :3 :D
Cartwheellou chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Hahahahaha! Sam in high heels! I would pay to see that!
BrightRaven -chris210racer chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
okay too fast much too fast.*vomits* sorry *vomits again for real in real life*
(vomit thing was true)
GothicWolfDream chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
cute 3
Sincerely The Sign Painter chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
This was all part of Tucker's plan, wasn't it.

Cute story.

Sincerely The Sign Painter
FReeTOBeMe1311 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
I loved it

It was soooo cute immature have to do that to two people I know see how well it works lol
Tori Stone chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
CUTE (:

I loved it!

It's so them (:
Sleeping Kangaroo chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
A bit quick, but sweet. Nice. Fluffy. I like it!
Danny Phantom Phanatic chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Poor Danny lost to his hormones. Its about time he goes with his feelings tho, he just needed an extra push. haha love the story!
Hepf chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I'm no english teacher, but I would like to give a few pointers I learned from school. I loved the whole plot line, but I think the kiss was too rushed into. When you get to the end of a story, and you want the characters to kiss, you don't want to just say "they kissed". You want to put more feeling into it. For instance I would have said this:

"Sam lost her grip on my desk, falling into my lap. She slowly looked up at me with her beautiful eyes, our noses touching. Without thinking, I filled the gap between our lips."

Just saying that's how I'd do it.

I'm not flaming because I LOVED the story. Just thought I'd give some helpful pointers for future stories :)
tykronos chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
tucker foley will die! but still, AWWWWW! keep writing my friend.
aslan333 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
good job.
Awsomaniatica chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Ha ha ha... loved every minute of it! Too cute!
Jazzy Girl kataanglover chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
awwwww that is too sweet (not really no story is too sweet)but quite a couple times i think you forgot to put a word in other then that Awesome
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