Nice poem!

this is good

I love how you angle the words out farther and farther and the ending..

it seems like the last word echos in my mind for a few minutes after I read it.

Stops...stops...stops...

I loved that poem! The ending was sensational! You should write more!

Whoa, that was deep. You gotta write more poems like this. Keep up the good work! ~ Rei ~

Powerful ending there, and the layout adds nicley to the depressing and morbid feel. Nice piece of work .~

my name is Jessica. I am 13 and a new writer. your writing is terrific and I beleive that you have the tallent to be a famous writer!:}

p.s. will you please read my poem. my pen name is jessdabest

Hmmm... I like the abrupt ending...

Baby, all I have to say is this: THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! My god this was good, I wish I could write poems like you! Me so jealous... But I guess it comes with practice eh? Well anyhoo, this is just WONDERFUL! I really can't put enough esclamation points behind this! But um, ah... Who's it about? First I thought Heero, but I dunno... Now I'm starting to think it's about Relena. Oh I don't know, it's a mystery! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Anyways, just keep it up girl, keep it up. You got talent that REALLY should be exposed to the world REALLY. If you want I can give you the e-mail adress to a poem subbmitting sight you can enter to compete against others, and win girfts. I'm not trying to advertize for 'em or anything, but you REALLY deserve a pat on the back for this poem. YOU REALLY DO! E-mail me at:

N' have a good day to you B-chan, and to everyone else that was INTELIGENT enough to read n' review this AMAZING poem! **

P.S. Disclaimer? o_O

this seems really farmiliar...but where's it from?

Wow...thanx for the review for my fic but this poem is...deep

hehehe... we like it. bunches. nice and morbid. we like you

Nice!

Wounderful poem.

Oh I liked that one, and the formatting was a nice touch.