Woah! My mind is blown...they say a picture paints a thousand word, but I will never be able to see how a picture could paint these 1,115 words...this was amazing. I'm left soaking in emotion, but am too shocked to start understanding all of them.

Bravo.

Keep writing!

~Quend

This is sad but so well written and I love the use of metaphor.

Gosh this is beautiful. As much as I like "popcorn" fanfiction, I love when I find a story like this one that leaves you feeling the emotions on such a deeper level. The imagery, the desperation, the longing, the sadness - bravo!

i wonder why this has so few reviews, the image you create with words is so breathtaking, so beautiful, so poetic. im saving this onto my laptop now.

Wow...

This is beautiful and so so sad. Gorgeous imagery, too. Ugh. Perfect

That was such beautiful writing. I'm saving this.