Reviews for Hit The Deck
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29
Awesome writing but man I wish it were a longer story
jj chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
very nice and way to short
Pyrane chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Why not ;D

***Pyrane***
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2015
Ugh I need a shower, can someone count how many times "fuck" was said?
FUCKYOUASSHOLE chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
Wow! This was such an interesting and original story. I really enjoyed reading it. I liked the plot and how at the end Neji turned out to be a very good guy. Aw, what a great happy ending.

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RinneLin chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
man! I liked it! it has the "pirates of the Caribbean" feeling,
Rhaziell chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Omg... This was such a good story! I love pirate stories :D
I'm gonna check more of your work! The pairing was really nice... I love neji so much.. his character was just as cocky as ever hehehe
AngelsInWasteland chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Adorable. ) Good job.
BlackKittyMoon chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Ahahaha Kidnaped by pirates wow
I would have been like just feed me and I'm cool
ayabirkin chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
aaawww! this was so cuuuuuttttee! normally, i don't go and read other pairings (or naruto being paired off with anybody else other than sasuke that is), but i think this will grow on me, since neji is a hunk in his own way.

i definitely liked the way he waited for naruto to decide on his own to stay. i like the story a lot. please post more.
Dragon's Flame of Life chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
It so adorable I loved it!
s chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
i love this!
aliendroid chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
First NejiNaru fic I have read and honestly CUTE!
singingrain chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Really liked this. Pirates are always a plus. The tenderness between the two at the end seemed a little abrupt, however. And I would have loved to see a smug Kiba teasing Naruto about giving in, but that's really just my own little personal preference.

I did really like how Neji seemed callous at first but then gave Naruto a blanket at night. It really showed a caring nature towards the boy rather than the initial sexual one.

Now I'm off to read your other billion fics. Seriously, do you eat manga and shit fanfiction?
moja-kocham chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
That was an amazing read! I absolutely adored reading this, the plot and the turn-out was very well written and the characters personality wasn't so far off from the real thing (well Anime...real...) You really captured a new side of Neji and Naruto that I love and I hope to read more like this in the future!

~Akuma
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