Hello !
This fic was aweeesome I really really loved it! Thanks for your work !

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Wow these stories keep getting better and better

I have to say this- why i saw the word ogre, I immediately thought of shrek xd

I'm all for overly uke Naruto but this is a bit underwhelming, T ... is a bit annoying here.

Naruto was a pathetic damsel in distress in this fic. He was constantly in need of rescue and never once pulled his own weight. He insisted on clinging to Sasuke like a leech, even when Sasuke didn't want him around, and then got himself into trouble during his missions with Sasuke. He was a wimp that had no business being on any of Sasuke's missions, yet he insisted on coming anyway. This Naruto shows all the very worst traits of your typical, weak damsel in distress heroine. For a oneshot, it's kind of outrageous that Naruto had to be saved no less than three times. It's impossible to understand why a strong, skilled fighter like Sasuke would ever want a partner who is nothing but weak baggage. This fanfiction did a massive disservice to Naruto's character.

Nice one!

Wow that was great, love stories about demons and such. I both liked and in a way didn't like how fast this story went through everything. Most of the time you did understand when there was a time skip but somtime sit wasn't so obvious. I am really impressed over how this could have been like a 10 chapter story but you made it in to a one chapter with out getting the readers confused, (well at least I think so.)
It was really good and I love SasukexNaruto

This was the longest one-shot I've ever read. It was very enjoyable and good too. You've outdone yourself.

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Well... i LOVED IT it was so dam funny AND HOT! deeer gosh !
thank you for your work

I really love the idea behind this story. A demon hunter stuck with a demon. Very cool. I like cool demon Naruto fics.

Upon saying that, Naruto wasn't really a cool demon. He was more a spoiled, pampered princess who did nothing. Absolutely nothing. Which is super disappointing. I really never though I'd see the day when Naruto became Sakura. This makes me so sad.
On the other end of the scale, Sasuke was made of awesome. I loveloveloved him. He was all strong and kickass, pretty much everything I love in a good action/adventure SasuNaru.

While the last scene was very cute and everyone (should) likes smut, I like Sasuke and Naruto's relationship because they're equals. I like fox demon Naruto because it's in his nature to be super protective of his mate.
I think this could be redone much better. But, I still really liked it. I really like all your works that I've read.
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i loved it it was absolutly adorable

This is probably your best oneshot. The idea is pretty unique, having Sasuke work as a demon killer who rescues Naruto the demon prince and ends up stuck with him. The plot was arguably the strongest point of the fic.

Having said that, I wasn't that into the characters. The side-pairings felt totally tacked-on, like you asked yourself how many side pairings can be squeezed into a oneshot and tried to do it. Because honestly, what did KakaIru, NejiGaa, and ItaKiba bring to the story? Absolutely nothing. Most of those were just mentioned and then forgotten, so why even include KakaIru hints, for example?

I also did not like how girly and useless Naruto was in the story. All he did was whine and whimper most of the time. It was also pretty lame how he was still a virgin after 3,000 plus years. You could have given him his balls back if you'd let him top, but Sasuke absolutely shot that down, so we just ended up with girly, princess complex Naruto instead. He got rescued a bunch of times, insisted on tagging along when all he did was get in the way, decided all by himself that he wanted Sasuke to be his man and then whined and cajoled to make it happen, was a purehearted virgin who had been waiting thousands of years for his man, and finally took the feminine position in bed. How is he not the classic "girlfriend character" in this story? I honestly did not understand why Sasuke ended up falling for him, except that male leads always fall for the chick who keeps throwing herself at them, so that's what Sasuke did.

Had there been less characters in the story (and had the fic bothered to develop the ones it included), that would have improved the story even more. Additionally, had Naruto been a little less princess-like, that also would have been a major improvement. Doing a better job on Naruto's character would have lifted this from a pretty-good fic to a good, maybe even great fic.

Ulala :D I really like it! :D It's hot and funny :D

Oh...damn...that was so sexy! Loved it!

Aw man, that was amazing!