Wow, that ending was so f*cking unsatisfying.

It took one apology from minato, to get over years of not only intense abuse .

He has a good life in Kumo, they are him as a person. They never once abused him, they were nothing but nice to him.

But Naruto is really considering abandoning them,just because one apology and for a village that already wasted a hundred chances and years of his life?

the lemon was a pretty good one keep up the good work

This is bullshit. Worst fanfic I ever read.

ur out of line dog boy

I'm quite sure you'll consider this a flame, but here goes - you just stopped giving a f**k at some point, didn't you? Not only is the whole premise distressingly unbelievable(a seal master, Minato, having that little confidence in his own abilities) but the way you jerked people's entire worldviews around gave me whiplash.

In addition, once you credit Naruto with killing Kisame, Kakuzu and Hidan, then Shikamaru killed Hidan, and Kisame's ALIVE? I don't know what's going on anymore. That's it, I QUIT!

Some parting advice, since I feel I deserve to tell you something in return for the time I spent on this review, it could have been a beautiful tale of character development and character-driven storytelling. Instead, what we get is what looks like the outcome of an entire Groundhog Day-style time-loop to someone looking in from the outside. Maybe use that to explain Minato's turnaround. Even better, only hint at it through a throwaway line, like "I lived a hundred lifetimes that day." or something.

1st off, why would naruto just forgive his father like that, and i'm pretty sure kushina would kill minato.. not say let's be a happy family? seriously.

garbage!

I liked! Plis continue writing plis

Bye! n.n

Another poece fo pure garbage lol

That doesn't really seem fair to Naruto he's gonna get jumped by Pein, Konan, and Zetsu and Hinata is giving him no choice to get her pregnent. I would kinda laugh if Hinata was not able to have kids so she spent all that money for nothing... I feel like a horrible for finding that to be possibly humerous I AM SORRY PLEASE FORGIVE ME

They say to truly understand someone you must walk a mile in their shoes, but Minato walked a thousand in Naruto's in 1 day

please update soon!

LEMONS! GIVE ME MORE! SEX! PEVERTEDNESS! IT FEEDS MY SOUL!1111111!1!11

i feel sorry for u the news cockblock me too bro

thanks alot i just happened to have been eating peanut m&ms when i was reading this chapter and puked my guts of and those were got m&m's too... wait nooooooooooooo dam you!