I thought it the chapter very cute! :3

Post Soon!

At first, I was sad that Ven and Aqua have to gone through hurt and comfort but for the last chapter, I was happy they're finally together. I hope for the next chapter to be updated soon, I love seeing Ven & Aqua together as a couple. (_)

Hurray! An update! This story gets funnier by the chapter. And just like the chapter name I didn't see that coming.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Awwwww! That was such a cute ending to this chapter! ;) So I didn't feel well this morning, so I decided to stay home from classes and rest, And what better wy to rest that to lay in bed all day and read ;) This uh, series or stories is turnings out beautifully! And I can't wait ro read more, And I basically read most of this today, So I figured I might get annoying if I reviewed every chapter, LOL! But Like I said I ca' wait for another one of your updates :D

aqua's sure acting skanky then again this whole story's bin like monopoly

hey when are you updating?

and so they got together! however they scene was not so good as the one with terra , i hope you will write one good scene for them

and dont make ven so childish

how about making save aqua from vanitas while he tries to force her to a kiss or something

and ven so us his swordsplay to us !

update soon

i really like it

its cool

man poooooooooor ven i hopr he get a kiss from the girl too

keep it up good story

man at last we got into the point!

i hope they end up together now !

cool story

awwww, how sweet! so much romance here :D loved it! and finally, Ven and Aqua are together! xD though I'm not sure how Eiko is going to take it...

ugh, i haven't read and reviewed in sooo long... school sucks! D: but i will try and read and review as much as i can :)

definitely loved the Terra and Aqua moment! Aqua sure did pull a big move... ;) i wonder what happened to Rikku :(

YAY! THANK GOD MY FAVORITE PAIRINGS ARE HERE!

Finally! Ven got to kiss Aqua too! I hope you update more!

I'm not quite sure what to say. This chapter was really suspenseful. I knew that at some point Aqua was going to confess to Terra. The way it happened was surprising. Who knew that Terra had hidden feelings for Aqua? Or maybe he's just new to love. Even though he's the older boy, Ven seems to be more mature when it comes to those things.

I wonder what Aqua's thoughts were in this situation since it was told from Terra's perspective. She's so mysterious. What could Rikku have been doing at that time at night? I don't think she'd "stalk" Terra and considering the description of her state I really have to think.

All in all I found this a really intimate chapter pertaining to Terra. I can't wait for the next one. I mean what could happen in this love triangle? With Rikku of course, she only has eyes for Terra after all. Oh yes, and Yuna and Tidus, after the previous chapter I really want to see where their relationship goes. Or maybe that's just me being nosy but I can't help it!

Yes! Yuna is so spunky, and Tidus was so sweet! Sora, I can't believe he was so strict. But I guess it paid off, I mean he and Kairi did go off into their 'Secret' Room. I have to say for parents they are extremely sexually active, typical Sora and Kairi. This goes for Namine and Roxas too!

Since I just finished four chapters I'm going to comment on them too! Yes, finally Aqua is coming out of her shell! She's seeing the good side of life. Well the more romantic and cliche and the things most women look for in a relationship. Anyways! Hurray for Ven! I personally give him my approval.

Namine's comment about Roxas and his keyblade. When he jumped through the window and Ventus was extremely nonchalant about it was hilarious! Natural Namine behavior.

I knew Kairi was meddling with her children's love lives. Haha, Sora can't have his way all the time. I wonder what she knows about Terra. She's quite the Love Guru.

I can't wait for what's to come!

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