This is perfect. Thanks for it.

;_; NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

It was a bit sad that loki still was happy for 5 lifeline and will continue to fake to smile another 5. How many year is a lifeline?
I still wondering what was thor pressing into his hand that Loki let vanish inside his clothes.

Not sure if you know about the new pairing feature, but you should consider marking this as a pairing between Loki and Thor so that people looking for fics with a pairing like that will find your story to read. :)

*Cries* Poor Loki! Great job

Poor Loki...I hope he and Thor will be re-united and be together like they belong...X3 (they do make a lovely couple...) The elf king sounds nice too though...For once, Loki is not abused, or bullied, or hurt...so yeah. thank you for that (though he still suffers emotionally)
Well this was a lovely fiction. Very sweet and well written! XD i enjoyed reading it

So. I have to know. Did Thor wait for Loki?

Woaw, the end... I had a hard time breathing. It's very, very sad.
Keep it up !

S.

sad! :(
really, i feel so sorry for him, but its good work :)

;A; I don't even know what to say... I just want to cry. This was wonderfully written or else I obviously wouldn't have such a reaction. It's just... so sad. TTTT

This made me want to throw up my sadness... Very good though. Very good.

I beg you to write a companion story to this,in which Loki returns to Thor, and happiness, and smuttiness galore! :D

tht was just heartbreaking; a sequel please?

I want to know what Thor gave him! Continue please!

Ohhh...*bites lip in sadness and anger*

Loki, Thor, allow me to present you with a wedding present. *destorys the dark elf king and any minions who would seek to interfere*

There, now you two can be together as you wish.

Thank you for this sad, distressing, yet wonderfully written story. JP