This was fantastic. Seriously, it gave me that feeling like I was there in the story, it sucked me right in. I stayed up for four hours past when I needed to sleep and I regret nothing.

the story was good, your style of writing needs some adjusting.

No need to hope... I indeed liked it! Sorry this took so long to read, but after this first chapter, I feel like I found the Christmas present that got lost in the mix. Looking forward to the next chapter.

oh hell no this story is not over please finish the pregnancy and the kid growing up ppppppppppppppppppppplllllll llllllllllllllllllllllllllll leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssss sssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee e

Hm, I think it's a little too soon for them to already do some...intimate things, especially since they supposedly met the other day. It was a good chapter, though. I enjoyed reading it!

Nice first chapter. You introduced a pretty good setting and conflict. I'm interested.

Onwards, to the next chapter! (:

*sigh* Amazing story! Good ending! But can you make a sequel? I am loving it!

really good fic, you should definitely do a sequel.

totally should do a sequel. This is epic by the way.

I loved this story so much! You did an amazing job. Please make a sequel! :) I would be very excited if you did! :) :)

Amazing story :D Good job :D

That was a crazy amazingly awesome chapter! I cant wait until the next one!

Ah! I cant wait till the next chapter.

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This is a great story line. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Make the next one longer pretty please. Awesome!