... I think I died a little inside. Great story, but it broke my heart.

I really enjoyed your rendition of Barty Jr. At first i was a bit sceptical that only 6 chapters would be enough, but I'm glad i took a chance on this story!

Beautifully written piece-I'm surprised more people haven't reviewed this.

The relationship felt so realistic. Even though the whole time I wanted Audrey and Barty to turn out happily together somehow, the way you ended it was just...perfect. I love how you portrayed Barty and Regulus as well. Despite the fact that they were Death Eaters, you really showed that they were just young people that made very bad mistakes due to their family or some sort of misguided belief. I think a lot of people seem to forget that about Death Eaters-that they're human too-and portray anyone who follows Voldemort as solely evil.

Again, it was an amazing read and I'm so glad you wrote it. Great job. :)

Every time I think this story is finished you write more! I liked that ending for Audrey, it feels like everything is properly finished now. I loved Sean and Hannah. Even though you've just shown little snippets of them you managed to make them into believable characters. Great job on this story as a whole, I've absolutely loved reading it.

You really outdid yourself with that chapter, such a heartbreaking ending. I absolutely loved it, I'm just a little disappointed that that really is the end now. I'd actually like to see a chapter set all those years later when Audrey reads in the Prophet that Barty had actually escaped Azkaban and infiltrated Hogwarts. It'd be interesting to see how she reacts to that when she thought he was dead for all that time.

Aww, that was beautiful and so sad. It's a shame there's not going to be any more, but that was a good way to end it.

I'd never really thought about Barty and Regulus being friends before reading this, but I really like the way you wrote about them and I love how you capture Barty's emotions after he's found out that Regulus is dead.

The ending was good as it leaves things open to interpretation, but it had a bit of a sting to it with Audrey realising how Barty's changed. It makes it all the more sad how things eventually turn out.

Great work on this story as a whole and I've thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for giving me something so great to read and I really hope you keep writing!

I'm so glad you've added more chapters to this. It's wonderful! I love the way you write, your characterisation and description are fantastic. Please write more!

Aww, this is amazing! It's written to an extremely high standard, and there was just something so lovely about them dancing together. I also love the way you've characterised Barty - he just seems like a rather lonely and unhappy kid in this, not really evil at all yet, and it makes it even sadder to think what he eventually turns into.

I think this story is a bit different - not many people write about Barty Jr or try and explore the different sides to him - and from the small snippet I've seen of Audrey she's seems like a very believable and likeable character. If you were to ever write more on this I would love to read it. Excellent work!