I've read the original, as have probably many other commenters here. And i think you've made a nice choice! At the end of the day, it is still rape even though everyone here reading ships them and thus subconsciously neglects the fact that ikuto did something like that... I just hope that this story won't be dropped halfway through rewriting. This story is really beautifully crafted so I hope I get to see the new side of it!

I can never tell if this is 2018 or not

Can't wait to read the updated version! Great job over the years. Hope to see the changes with your writing.

Hello! It's been a very long time since I've last read Spark of Life.
I admit I was one of the young ones who didn't understand the implications behind the fanfic at the time- mainly the dubious/non-con advances. I want to tell you that I do appreciate the changes the fic will undergo. Thank you so, so much.

I think it’s really admirable that you’re doing this! This story was already great (excluding the rape, of course,) and I can’t wait to read the rewrite!

Does this mean that you’re going to rewrite Indebted, too?

Yayy i like this series and can't wait for the rewrite~

what the fuck this is disgusting

U love these stories
Post more please
loving the story

tros bien !

I thought the writing was great. Nonetheless, because you wanted to finish off this story, the ending was rushed. You could have prolonged it for another chapter or two to add in to the storyline how the tape got to the female wolf, how kazumi was dealt with. But no, you didn't, which made the ending crappy and rushed. At times i felt Amu was being too... Much of a doll. So very easily gave in when she was madly in love with ikuto. Yes, people would do things for their love but she didnt really consider much and gave it much easily. There wasnt much conflict or inner turmoil. It made the story less flavourful.

And the part where Amu despise Tadase for raping LuLu when she first heard about it, did she forget what Ikuto did to her? So she hated tadase for raping someone but not ikuto? So in the name of love what he did was alright but not for others. She double-standards much lol.

But all in all, the initial and middle part of the story was well-delivered. Probably because I came over from a popular yet poorly written fanfic. That was really cringey. Kudos. Though i must say it was disappointing yaya and Kairi didnt get much screen time in this story. Nor was it mentioned how, or when they arrived at Amu's house for the Kaizumi dinner. They just suddenly popped up lol.

Congrats on making this story like that (I thought only once about Stockholm Syndrome XD). To be honest at first my main thoughts were: "Eeeeeehhhh... Wait, WAT" but after the initial shock it became a really inredible story. Good job! :)

NOOO ITS OVER! I've read a few of your other stories before, and when I clicked on this one, I was like "GOD YES! ITS MORG!" You really are my favorite fanfic author! Thank you for your stories!

I thought this was really cute. I really liked this

As always, I love your stories so much! I get so happy reading them! Loved this as much as the last one I read

But what happened with ikuto's father?