Reviews for The First Servant
Titanfire999 chapter 24 . 5/15
God damn this was too good to have ended.
Dragonheart Of Ireland chapter 24 . 10/6/2016
Please update again!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
why did Schneizel change the kid's name in the announcement?

Who is Faramond's father?
Scarease chapter 9 . 8/24/2014
Democracy is rule by mob law and is bound to go down in a fit of law dictionary witch is the dictionary used by use law system.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
Someone has been reading the Odessey to make such references lol...
Say This Pen Name Is Available chapter 24 . 8/4/2013
This might be abandoned but it's still beautiful. The smooth writing, the terrifyingly twisted ties between characters, the achingly tragic air to the whole piece, it's one of the best stories I've read in a while. The copious amounts of both concious and unconscious incest are a bit off-putting but I understand the reasons, both in story and out, for it which makes it a lot more palatable.
RPGSlime chapter 24 . 1/15/2013
This is too good. I wonder what is HE intending by helping the South.

And why doesn't Zero just order Schneizel to not do anything against Nunally or something, sure Suzaku isn't like that, but the point of Zero Requiem was that he was going to be Zero and not Suzaku from then on. And he did understood that the ends justified the means after the FLEIJA incident.
RPGSlime chapter 21 . 1/15/2013
Creepy. How did Lelouch survive?
Guest chapter 4 . 1/13/2013
I am wondering, didn't Lelouch abolish the Area-Number system? And you yourself said Britannia returned to it's original pre-war borders, but there's still Area 6 in South America, Area 3 in Mexico, etc.
ijpowers92 chapter 24 . 11/26/2012
huh. an interesting narrative style this chapter.
theAsh0 chapter 23 . 10/7/2012
oh god. lol! and scary..
theAsh0 chapter 20 . 10/7/2012
this moves real slowly, but it is a gem. it's a great mystery surely. Moving along slowly does mean I sometimes get confused, as I cannot quite remember a few chapters back. don't really know how you could fix that. maybe a summary at some point?
ijpowers92 chapter 23 . 9/19/2012
Gaah! What's his plan?! I'll be checking your deviantart page (which I was happy to discover between this chapter and the last) for any hints.
GBlackwell chapter 22 . 8/22/2012
Sorry it took so long to review this. Life got in the way.

Well the upshot is... I loved it. Ah, the opera. I loved your alternate history of Wagner, or Wainwright as he adopted in this universe. Committing suicide when his works were used for an agenda that he didn't agree with sounds exactly like him. And the allusions fit so well! Sieglinde and the disobedient Valkyrie... Siegmund, the hero first protected by Wotan, but not above being discarded out of necessity (well, hopefully, for our hero's sake, let's hope the parallels don't go to far...)

Anyway, Jeanne receiving the letter, and the tickets, and the night at the opera... it's just the way Lelouch would make a statement. It's just so... him, even if it's cruel. Right now, I'm hoping that Jeanne will become independent and berak free from this relationship, but considering the tone of the story, I'm not sure how likely that is.

And as for the last section of the chapter, I'm pretty sure I know who 'the Lord' is, and he's absolutely brilliant.

Keep writing!
ijpowers92 chapter 22 . 8/14/2012
Of course its not as simple as it is on the surface. Lelouch is a manipulator and a liar. Or maybe Jeanne missed an important line? Maybe both?
I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned next.
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