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Damn. Most excellent.

your details were amazing but the combination you made was bad enough to break my laptop. I despise who you are for it. Did yo your friends mother and live to tell the tale. Do something like harryxhermoine now that would be fun.

go fuck your friends mom and write a story about it. dont ruin others fandom

I always thought of Molly as a mother-figure to Harry...and well...I don't think I can ever read the books again...

simply magnificent, standing applause, teacher
keep writing more molly / harry

Oh wow. That was weird.

That was a shock, I just never thought of Molly like that.
Nice writing!

Cheers!

I skipped down to read the 1st person POV. I'll give some critique. You wrote the scene well. There are enough female authors of smut here that it is possible to piece together the female aspect of sexual encounters.

I am glad to see a non-male adult going after a youngster. I like Lucius preying upon pretty young thing fic, but the ladies need some representing, and who better to write it than a guy ;)

Criticism here: Molly would have given all her sons baths, and likely walked in on all of them, as you wrote. It didn't seem authentic that's he hadn't thought of Harry doing normal showering stuff. If, however, you meant that she hadn't thought of Harry fapping off in the shower, then perhaps that is true; but moms are aware of that activity by their kids, too. That said, certain personality types don't really think about practical, day-to-day, mundane activities, so perhaps that was what you were going for.

It does take much longer for a woman her age to get ready for the act. If she was lubricated quickly, then it was because she was reading erotic fiction or she had been fantasizing over Lockhart making a house

Nice

EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WHAT THE CRAP!

I don't know why, but I found that to be oddly fun read.

Sequel please! Maybe including Hermione in a three way.

hot

Nice story. Please more.