Oh, so there are more fics in this series? I'll have to take a look!

At least Cloud knows that this life is possible, now, and he can work hard to achieve it.

That was simply brilliant! I've always wondered if and why Cloud would become a member of the HBRC, and I think that you gave a very plausible (and highly entertaining) explanation. I do feel bad for the first victim of the Djinn Heartless, though.

But I bet that it was weird to get back into reality. You probably did it on purpose, but I noticed how the atmosphere changed drastically as soon as Cloud came to, so that was pretty nicely done.

Keep up the awesome work!

I sure can't blame Cloud for not wanting this to be a dream/to wake up. I'm hoping that the last chapter will be twice as long, because this story's getting better and better. You really have a way with words and the children are acting so adorable and exactly like children should act. -

Have I ever told you how much I love your writingstyle? And the fact that this is happening to Cloud only makes it so much more hilarious. And the idea with the Djinn is pretty creative, too.

Well, now that Cloud wants to hang out with everyone else, maybe what happened in his dream will come true. This was a funny and enjoyable story. Too bad it had to end. :)

Awwwww, it's over! Lol, but nonetheless, a great read! The alternate reality was a welcome change to that of everyone else having a stick up their butt, and to see them live as just regular people was refreshing.

Does this story explain why Cloud was there for Tifa for a brief moment in ASSOMC? :O

Aww, Cloud is starting to like this alternate reality. I'll feel bad for him when he wakes up. :( Update soon! :D

i like it. good job!

Holy domestication Batman! I like it! I hope Cloud doesn't wake up soon, just so we can see what happens next.

To add - McCallister, a pothead? lolololol

Lol, this already is pretty great! :D I can't wait to read more! I mean, a domesticated Leon! What has the world come to! Man, this is hilarious! Update soon!