Aside from the massive block of dialogue from Castle, that was a bitch to follow, generally good. Some advice for the future from me would be to find a way to split up that kind of stuff. Like, he paused for a moment, go on to talk about what Kate felt while he spoke or something like that. A well place pause can work out to be amazing.

This was well thought out and well written. I loved how you actually wrote a Castle book, and then wrote a parallel in the Caskett story. A novel idea, I say.

To be a little more realistic, i'd add about six months between final revision and book release.

BRILLIANT! AMAZING! WORDS CANNOT DO THIS JUSTICE! And the fact that you took on the challenge of actually writing an exerpt from a Castle novel that doesn't exist and doing so so flawlessly is mind boggling. The characters were perfect and I love how Castle and Beckett spoke about themselves viz their alter egos. Fantastic!

Sweet! I love this. Life mirrors fiction. Or is it the other way around?

:O

impressive

continuous

please

Would love to read more of this one. Sounds like a winner! Thanks.

Gloria

oops! :)

Great story...

Oh yes. Brilliant

Worth insomnia. Glad you wrote it. Glad that I read it.

OM