LOVE the smut. It's written so well, like the primal instinct it can be when there is so much built-up tension. Wonderfully done.

I also love how both aristocratic and arrogant Draco still is. You did him nicely, I applaud you!

Haha, I want to dress slutty sometimes too, Ginny! But I own nothing slutty so I can't.

Ami

It sooo funny and sexy, love it!

"All this time, I thought I was competing with a git like Creevey, when actually, I was never in the fucking race because you thought I was gay because of how I dress!"

God, totally made my day a hundred times better. Interesting story :)

Poor Ginny! She clearly has bad luck with blokes...And six years without sex? Ouch..

I liked the beginning, and a drunken ginny is always entertaining to read! Athough I'm a little disappointed that Draco and Ginny get together it was amusing to read! :D

This was really quite clever. I love her "bff" in Jonathon and the setting for it all. It's really descriptive and well written. :)

Eeep. Smut.

You'll soon discover I'm not a huge fan of smut, but oh well. This was still funny. I'm glad they got a happy ending, and Draco's anger was priceless!

Thanks for taking up the challenge!

And so it begins. Ginny is in for a rude awakening, hehehehe.

Poor Colin. I almost feel sorry for him. Almost.

Ahh, poor delusional Ginny. I have a feeling that Colin may be the one who ends up gay. Or not.

I know this is a weird comment, but I really wanted to hit Draco in this chapter - and it's only because he ordered her meal for her without even asking her what she wanted. I HATE it when guys do that.

Ahem, anyway. Personal issues aside, I'm loving how this is developing. On to the next chapter!

Hehe, this sounds fun! Ginny is definitely acting a lot sluttier than I normally imagine her, but I think the narrator has a point - who cares when you're in a gay bar? And I think we can see Ginny is just a little bitter that all her boyfriends have turned out to be gay, so why not run with it. I do wonder what Draco thought of her, lol.

Ha, I found this VERY amusing! I totally love the idea of Dean Thomas' gay bar. Yesss!

I think you do a good job of setting up Ginny for disaster here. :) Her love life is crap, she apparentley hates her job, and all her past BF's were gay. Sucks! Makes sense that she's dancing all slutty!

I do find their encounter a bit OOC here, but that's generally just because I like a little more snarky banter and dislike between the pair before they, obviously, fall madly in love. This seemed too easy going and casual for their first time meeting after the war, but maybe the fact that they were in a bar helped. :)

Can I express how much I LOVE Blaise here? He's fabulous! I can totally tell that Jonathan and Blaise are going to get together... at least, I hope. ;)

All in all, quite a strong start here. Good job!

Great and hilarious story! Well done )

Whoa, you posted all the chapters together! No, no - we must leave something to the imagination. ;)

Anyway, I really liked this first chapter. I think it goes in the line of what Kim requested - you're doing an awesome job so far. This part was HILARIOUS when applied to Draco Malfoy:

["Everything about him was gay. How can you not see that?" She retorted.

"Although I admit he is extremely anal about his appearance, he had manicured nails, and he was at a gay bar, that doesn't mean he is gay/]

LOL! Poor Draco, so misinterpreted! XD