Reviews for Spoiled Children
Guest chapter 2 . 6/1/2014
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Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
I LOVE THIS ENDING. WITH THE CONFESSION OVER THE PA. VERYSWEET OF HIM AND VERY FUNNY. I LIKE.
gemmawolf chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Omigod. 8D How cruel, mwehehheh!
CrazedOnigiri chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
I always knew Alfred bottomed. He is way too young and naive. I love the kinky ending BTW.
mar-iguana chapter 2 . 12/8/2012
Why was that so awesome and entertaining? Lol wow but still, Loooooved iiiiiit You did a great job!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/12/2012
eh heh.
xx-animeXalchemist-xx chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
I read this on my phone AGES ago and I've been looking for it ever since. I FINALLY FOUND IT! Man, I absolutely love this fic, it's hilarious and cute and just awesome. Thank you for writing it! :D

Ah, Alfred, your PA speech was brilliant. I was in stitches XD

Keep up the great work

xx-animeXalchemist-xx
Iggycat95 chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
Omfg this was PERFECT. i loved how sweet alfred was being to arthur when he was topping X3 nya so cute! And tht speech, holy crap. Tht was just BRILLIANT. i said to myself "omg if i were there in tht school at tht moment, i wouldve got up, found alfred, given him a double high five and one hell of a pat on the back. Then i wouldve gotten tht speech published and fucking framed in like the white house or something. Not even joking lmao." this was just awesome, im totally faving this.
xTsunderexTomatoxLovinox chapter 2 . 1/5/2012
OMG LOVED! X3 This was so sweet in some parts, and hot in others~ This is, without a doubt, one of the best fics I've read on here. Your style is so... idk, I can't even describe, it's so amazing w Thank you for posting this, really.
Princess Twila chapter 2 . 12/20/2011
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE! omg i absolutely love the ending! why can't i have a guy like alfred? *sniffle* thank you for resolving it the way you did!
yeahnomore chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Ohfuck I love this story. So incredibly cute.

YOU TELL THEM, ALFRED.
OMG chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
All hail thyne god/goddess teaandcharcoalforbreakfast! i loved alfreds speech! CUTE TO THE mAX!
krol chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
HEEY! THAT WAS SO COMPLETELY AWESOME! I love your way of writing, you tell us all the details we want to read, in a cute, but sexy way! Oh God, I really love this fic, the second chapter was sooooo good! And the end finished it just the right way! I would love so much if you decided to write more... please take this as a hint!
aphfangirl7476 chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
That was amazing! XD I totally want more! Lol
Nibzo chapter 2 . 7/18/2011
"I triple-dog dare you!" Oh dear. I may never be able to watch A Christmas Story again. XD

But otherwise that was fabulous. Loved Alfred's speech at the end. :)
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