It's not like that I don't like this story but playing with emotions still make me sad ... still in my fav list but I am not sure it is right or wrong. But u already did a great job on this story.

The story was ok. I liked the plot but the ending fell kinda off. First off, Misaki's reaction to her father who pretty much destroyed her youth and her family, I don't think that even if she is going through the worst nightmare of her life, will she accept him so easily. And I know its your story, you're the one who decides how Misaki feels about everything but she wouldn't just have sex with Hinata when she knows she doesn't want to, after all, its been 3 years of her relationship and she still acts innocent in front of him, while she had done it with Usui just within a few months of their relationship. And lastly, knowing the baby's father is no way to decide who she loves and who she's going to spend her life with. Even if Hinata was the father, she could have chosen Usui and then they could have made arrangements about taking care of the baby. The way you put it didn't really reveal who she truly loved and wanted to spend her life with. And abortion was always an option. And in the end, there was no reason to call Hinata instead of Usui when her water broke, even if you did it just for the sake of suspence and all. In fact, I don't think Usui would have liked him to even be involved in the childbirth.
In conclusion, the basic plot is fine but the ending really didn't appeal to me at all.

Awesome! Do you have anymore?

Way to single handedly ruin an amazing character. Misaki should not be your protagonist here, stick with Yuuki Cross. Never. Would happen. OOC, unrealistic, morally cringe worthy. For future criticism, change your cast to fit a story this unbalanced.

waaaahh I still feel bad for sanshita-kun. even though I am with Takumisa.

Yay

cool

too long! :)

Great Story! That last chapter really had me. I was hyperventilating by just reading it. I was afraid that Hinata was the father and not Usui, but thankfully he wasn't.

wow. this is great! your a good writer

I honestly don't think Usui would be comfortable with Misaki openly telling them that they slept together, I mean from what I've seen in the anime, he's quite protective in keeping sexual images of Misa to himself

omg! its sooooooooooo nice! it made my heart swell with happiness!
thank u soooo much 4 writin such an awesum story!
i sorta have a story in mind!
plz plz plz contact me!
im der on
anisha kumbhar.
thank u.

This was my birthday present (I was born on April 4) and I loved it! And I believe you should make a sequel!

I loved it! I don't care if you continue or not, but I don't really see how you could. But it was amazing. I can't wait to read more of your stories in the future!

Continue witm more lovey dovey scenes and another baby